Entry 1121 — An Improvement

When I happened to see my blog entry two before this one, I noticed I’d forgotten to finish my poem’s dividend-shed.  After I did that, I reformatted the dividend to have it going off the edge of the page, like the ellipsis.  This little trope has long been a favorite of mine–maybe it’s now a mannerism, but I refuse to stop using it.

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2 Responses to “Entry 1121 — An Improvement”

  1. karl kempton says:

    fine poem

  2. Bob Grumman says:

    Thanks, Karl! Maybe I’m not nuts for liking it myself.

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