“Drifts” — by Marilyn R. Rosenberg « POETICKS

“Drifts” — by Marilyn R. Rosenberg

 

 

 

Artist’s Statement

DRIFTS

 
Created on the computer at the end of 2003, “DRIFTS” can be any size. Life continues as phantoms reappear in the grid. Printed by ink jet on acid free paper, the water based ink is not archival, but should last 20 years in the shade.
The size is dependent on desire.
 
            Water as theme often appears through the years. The poet remembers, seeing the powerful sound of the country stream/river/creek in the sounds of the city. Moving water is securely waiting in the water tower containers and  fire hydrants to be available when needed for safety, for powerful uses. Excerpted from the gouache set of large facing pages, 6 WATER VOICES,  “#4. PUDDLING” and “#5. PROCRASTINATE” are set on top of one another with added words, images of fish and reflections of water towers to become DRIFTS
 
Group Exhibition:
 
2004, I, FOREIGN EYE, Neopolis Gallery, Cleveland OH, 
Curator: Will Neopolis.
 
Solo Exhibition:
 
2007, MRR VISUAL POETRY/ARTISTS’ BOOKS, Chappaqua Library Gallery, Chappaqua NY. Curator: Larry D’Amico.
 
Published:
 
Beaulieu, Derek, editor. SPEECHLESS 3,  2009, Alberta Canada, page 9.
 
On the Web (with much else by MRR): 20 September 2011
 
 
 
 

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Column020 — April 1996 « POETICKS

Column020 — April 1996

 

More about the South, Part Two

 


Small Press Review, Volume 28, Number 5, April 1996


 
 
 

     An Evening of Blaster Al.
     An Art Maggots/ Popular Reality Production
     200 East 10th Street, #603,
     New York NY 10003. $20. 94 min.

     Cotton Gin. 3408 Burlington Road,
     GreensboroNC 27405. SASE.

     CWM (and Dreams & Nightmares).
     1300 Kicker Road, Tuscaloosa AL. $3

     Curmudgeon. 2921 Alpine Rd.,
     #112, Columbia SC 29223. $3.

     Exquisite Corpse. Box 25051, Baton Rouge LA 70894. $3.50.

     Fat Free. Box 80743, Athens GA 30608. SASE.

     O!!Zone. 1266 Fountain View Drive, Houston TX 77057. $4.

     Semiquasi Review. Box 55892,
     Fondren Station, Jackson MS 39296. SASE.

     Shattered Wig Review.
     2407 North Maryland #1, Baltimore MD 21218. $6.

     Silent But Deadly. USF #30444,
     4202 Fowler Ave., Tampa FL 33620. SASE.

     Situation. Mark Wallace,
     10402 Ewell Ave., Kensington MD 20895. $2.

     Sticks. Box 399, Maplesville AL 36750. $3.


I only got to four publications in my last column’s discussion of experioddica in the South. There are still eleven to go. One of them is the Maryland magazine, Situation. Its sixth issue includes Ron Silliman’s a section of his long project, The Alphabet, that takes surrealistic and jump-cut techniques to wondrous–sometimes even lyrical–heights, as in: “The trees at first catch, then amplify, sounds of the storm. Baby at the stage when he can pull himself up but not take a step without support.” Fascinating combustination of natural and human struggle, that!

For stimulating criticism of advanced literature, I would strongly recommend Andy DiMichele’s Jackson, Mississippi, zine, Semiquasi Review. For close readings, from many points of view and expertise, of poetry that is sometimes burstnorm, I would also recommend a Florida zine I’ve mentioned more than once before, Silent But Deadly, where poets from all over the country critique, or just plain defame, each other’s work.To my knowledge (but who can keep up with all that’s going on in poetry nowadays?), there aren’t any other magazines in the South that specialize in burstnorm poetry. There are several, however, that occasionally publish samples of it. Among them is the Houston publication, O!!Zone. It has given coverage to people like John M. Bennett, Crag Hill, Guy Beining and C. L. Champion. Indeed, one of the latter’s contributions to O!!Zone (#12), “poema cocci,” ranks among the best plurasethetic poems I came across in 1995. It consists of four scattered rectangles. In the middle of one is the word “cloud”; in another is a “c”; and “clod” is in a third. The fourth is empty. Sky, sea, earth . . . and mystery.

Another southern magazine that is favorably disposed toward burstnorm poems is the Tuscaloosa, Alabama, magazine, CWM. So far only one issue of it has appeared. One of its poems, by G. Huth, issues from the same kind of sensibility as C. L. Champion’s. It consists of just the word, “watearth,” to neatly sum up our planet’s non-gaseous elements–and the two kinds of tear that hold them together/apart.

CWM co-editor, David Kopaska-Merkel, also publishes a fine sci-fi story & poem zine out of Tuscaloosa, Dreams and Nightmares, that on occasion has off-beat contributions such as #42’s one-word poems (“pwoermds,” according to G. Huth). The ones I liked best were two by Huth, “unneceszxzsary” and “thingk,” and John Graywood’s “Freudulent” (to which he has given the title, “Psychofeit”).

The Baltimore-based Shattered Wig Review also mixes otherstream material, particularly schizurealistic poems and madcap “memoirs” by Al Ackerman, into its offerings. Others who merge surrealism with jump-cut techniques to excellent effect in its recentest issue (#11) are John M. Bennett (e.g., “Such a ‘light sucking’ my arm you sleeping, vacuum/ where my sunder seethes, ‘caught ‘n cauterized’ like a/ ziplock bag of coughing, rains outside.”), Jake Berry (e.g., “When the telephone/ sweats nymphomaniac pollen or barmaid nipples/ clot in the breeze;” and Simon Perchik, (e.g., “These shadows I grow in my good arm/ cracked the ceiling, cross –. In the movie/ gunners tracking the screen/ freeze where its light is brightest”).

Speaking of Ackerman, my duty to Humor in America compels me to announce that there’s an Ackerman video out now. It consists of two 17-minute films by Steve “Sleaze” Steele: “I, The Stallion” and “Kangaroo Island”–with a brief cameo of Ackerman, the Ling Master himself–plus a one-hour live reading by Steele at Stately Crowbar Manor 4 October 1994 of the following Ackerman stories: “The Ecstasy of Macaroni,” “The Autobiography of a Flea–or Little Women,” “I Remember Spine Weakly,” “The True Reality,” “The Man in the Green Nightshirt” and “Glunk.” If you like tv sitcoms, you won’t get much from this; if you have a sense of humor, you will.

Mary Veazey’s stylishly-produced Sticks, like CWM, is more knownstream than otherstream but it has included work by Richard Kostelanetz and myself, so deserves mention here. Its less venturesome poems are top-notch, too, and include specimens by such excellent poets as Mark Fleckenstein and X. J. Kennedy.

I’ve heard good things about the range of the Baton Rouge zine, Exquisite Corpse, but found little cutting-edge material in the only issue I’ve seen (and been unable to find for a second look). Elsewise, Curmudgeon, out of South Carolina; Cotton Gin, out of North Carolina; and the Georgia zine, Fat Free, are newcomers to watch, Cotton Gin being the most serious of them, in my view, with a fine combination of veterans like Bennett and younger poets. No doubt there are other first-rate burstnorm publications in the area that I’ve not run into yet. It seems certain to me that the South’s zines are making as consequential a contribution to the cause of innovative poetry and related art as any other region’s. They’re well worth investigating further.

 

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Column014 — June 1995 « POETICKS

Column014 — June 1995

 

 
 

Trying for an NEA Fellowship

 


         Small Press Review, Volume 27, Number 6, June 1995


 

This past January I put in for an NEA fellowship in poetry for the first time. I knew I’d have no chance of winning, but figured what the hell, the application procedure was easy enough, and it’d be an experience I could eventually write about, in the process getting off some shots at the mediocrities beating me out, like Willard Spiegelman did two years ago when I tried for a Guggenheim in literary criticism. Willard has founded his reputation on the thesis that all the best contemporary poets are didactic–because their poems express points of view. He also believes that A. R. Ammons is a visual poet because his poems’ left-hand margins are sometimes ragged. But enough of Willard. My real reason for this essay is to pass on a little information about the NEA competitions, and a few of the thoughts that occurred to me while I was filling out forms for the one I entered.

The first thing someone interested in the poetry competition should know is that to enter it you have to have had twenty or more poems published in five or more magazines, single- author books, or anthologies (but not the ones whose publishers ask contributors to buy copies of, even if they don’t require them to). Otherwise, anyone can apply, so it’s a pretty democratic set-up. You simply send in a brief resume, proof of having sufficient publishing credits, and a set of eight one-page poems (or a single long poem of up to 15 pages). But beware: “Competition for fellowships is rigorous. Potential applicants should consider carefully whether or not their work merits support at the national level.” Good grief.

One aspect of the procedure struck me as unfair: the policy of not allowing an applicant to include explanatory material with his work. reversing this policy would, of course, most benefit burstnorm poets like me since NEA judges do not yet know how to read–or, to be more accurate, experience–what we’re doing. Preventing us from explaining our poems thus discriminates in favor of received-craft poets whom everybody understands, even NEA judges.

Many lovers of poetry would retort that judges should discriminate in favor of poetry that can stand on its own, that if you have to explain a work of art, it’s no good. This is crap. All poetry requires explanation, it’s just that traditional poetry gets it in the schools, innovative poetry doesn’t. The response to that, I suppose, would be that poetry that requires more explanation than schools provide is flawed. To that I can only reply, “To each his own–but why wouldn’t it be fair to reward both easily comprehended and difficult poetry?”

To get that done we need not only to allow explanatory material, we need a better way of picking judges. I therefore suggest that all candidates for judgeships be required to write essays describing their poetics. Then some group of practicing poets such as those listed in the directory of poets that Poets & Writers puts out should be asked to rank them numerically, on the basis of their essays. But the candidates ranking highest shouldn’t necessarily then be made judges, just some of them–plus two or three randomly- selected from those ranking the lowest. Making judges of a few candidates unpopular with run-of-the-mill poets would give at least an occasional non-dominant- mode voice a chance of getting NEA support.

I have one other suggestion: it is for NEA judges also to numerically rank the applicants they review. Thus, if I ranked 3,996th out of 4,000 applicants, I (and posterity) would have a useful idea of how I was doing at the time in the Big World. How the judges were doing would be more evident, too. Indeed, all kinds of useful information could be extracted if such a ranking system were in effect–like average placement of visual poets compared to songmode poets compared to Ashbery clones compared to street poets, etc., etc. For those who believe in programs like the NEA, rankings could help high-ranking non-winners–by encouraging them, and perhaps persuading publishers who go by credentials rather than achievement to open their pages to them. And my kind of publishers could save time by closing their pages to anyone whose NEA ranking was higher than 3,996th. All kinds of good things could come from adopting this idea of mine. What I’ve said about explanatory material and how to select judges is worth considering, too. So don’t dawdle: write Congress about my ideas at once! (But say they were Willard’s, not mine.)

This past January I put in for an NEA fellowship in poetry for the first time. I knew I’d have no chance of winning, but figured what the hell, the application procedure was easy enough, and it’d be an experience I could eventually write about, in the process getting off some shots at the mediocrities beating me out, like Willard Spiegelman did two years ago when I tried for a Guggenheim in literary criticism. Willard has founded his reputation on the thesis that all the best contemporary poets are didactic–because their poems express points of view. He also believes that A. R. Ammons is a visual poet because his poems’ left-hand margins are sometimes ragged. But enough of Willard. My real reason for this essay is to pass on a little information about the NEA competitions, and a few of the thoughts that occurred to me while I was filling out forms for the one I entered.

The first thing someone interested in the poetry competition should know is that to enter it you have to have had twenty or more poems published in five or more magazines, single- author books, or anthologies (but not the ones whose publishers ask contributors to buy copies of, even if they don’t require them to). Otherwise, anyone can apply, so it’s a pretty democratic set-up. You simply send in a brief resume, proof of having sufficient publishing credits, and a set of eight one-page poems (or a single long poem of up to 15 pages). But beware: “Competition for fellowships is rigorous. Potential applicants should consider carefully whether or not their work merits support at the national level.” Good grief.

One aspect of the procedure struck me as unfair: the policy of not allowing an applicant to include explanatory material with his work. reversing this policy would, of course, most benefit burstnorm poets like me since NEA judges do not yet know how to read–or, to be more accurate, experience–what we’re doing. Preventing us from explaining our poems thus discriminates in favor of received-craft poets whom everybody understands, even NEA judges.

Many lovers of poetry would retort that judges should discriminate in favor of poetry that can stand on its own, that if you have to explain a work of art, it’s no good. This is crap. All poetry requires explanation, it’s just that traditional poetry gets it in the schools, innovative poetry doesn’t. The response to that, I suppose, would be that poetry that requires more explanation than schools provide is flawed. To that I can only reply, “To each his own–but why wouldn’t it be fair to reward both easily comprehended and difficult poetry?”

To get that done we need not only to allow explanatory material, we need a better way of picking judges. I therefore suggest that all candidates for judgeships be required to write essays describing their poetics. Then some group of practicing poets such as those listed in the directory of poets that Poets & Writers puts out should be asked to rank them numerically, on the basis of their essays. But the candidates ranking highest shouldn’t necessarily then be made judges, just some of them–plus two or three randomly- selected from those ranking the lowest. Making judges of a few candidates unpopular with run-of-the-mill poets would give at least an occasional non-dominant- mode voice a chance of getting NEA support.

I have one other suggestion: it is for NEA judges also to numerically rank the applicants they review. Thus, if I ranked 3,996th out of 4,000 applicants, I (and posterity) would have a useful idea of how I was doing at the time in the Big World. How the judges were doing would be more evident, too. Indeed, all kinds of useful information could be extracted if such a ranking system were in effect–like average placement of visual poets compared to songmode poets compared to Ashbery clones compared to street poets, etc., etc. For those who believe in programs like the NEA, rankings could help high-ranking non-winners–by encouraging them, and perhaps persuading publishers who go by credentials rather than achievement to open their pages to them. And my kind of publishers could save time by closing their pages to anyone whose NEA ranking was higher than 3,996th. All kinds of good things could come from adopting this idea of mine. What I’ve said about explanatory material and how to select judges is worth considering, too. So don’t dawdle: write Congress about my ideas at once! (But say they were Willard’s, not mine.) 


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Bob Grumman’s Small Press Review Columns « POETICKS

Bob Grumman’s Small Press Review Columns

As of 29 August 2011, I have a copy here at my blog of each of my Small Press Review columns.  These, up through the September 2009 one, were saved HERE by an outfit called Reocities when Geocities, where they had been, deleted down.  Reocities also saved much else I had at Geocities, for which I am extremely grateful.

I hope to keep them up to date, and add copies of the other reviews I’ve done for SPR, and perhaps commentary on them.  I plan some sort of hard copy collection of them.

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Column003 — October 1993 « POETICKS

Column003 — October 1993

 

An Insult to Literature

 


 Small Magazine Review, Volume 1, Number 5, October 1993


 
         Lost & Found Times, #31, July, 1993; 56pp.;           137 Leland Ave., Columbus OH 43214. $5.

Seven years ago Stuart Klawans wrote in The Nation that Lost &  Found Times insulted "the past 3000 years of literature."  A  rather slip-shod writer, Klawans neglected to add that it also  insulted the past 3000 years of visual art, for surely that was  the case.  It still is: among the 300 or so works by 80 poets and  other artists in the latest LAFT (#31) is a set of three crude  drawings.  One is of a man's hoisted, bent leg with what look  like cat-tails hanging from it.  A barely legible scrawl  identifies this as "leg's dripping."  Drawings of a pencil point  captioned, "bare pencil," and a hand gripping a bedpost ("bed's  grip") complete the trio--which is by John M. Bennett, the  magazine's editor, and someone identified only as "Cornpuff."     Elsewhere is a scratchy drawing by Gertrude Granofsky of a round  face with a little pig-snout for a nose, and larger pig-snouts  for eyes.  A third specimen of LAFT-illumagery, a collage by  Malok, seems little more than thrown-together scraps of  supermarket tabloid texts and photographs.  Certainly these are  an insult to traditional art.  But they are much more than petty  mockery.  Both the Bennett/Cornpuff and Granofsky pieces vibrate  out of compelling if strange corners of their creators' minds; as  for Malok's collage, cut-outs from a science text about torque  and electrodes, and a poem that includes a reference to "the  Stars," as "the real popes/laughing fat," give an eerie master-  intelligence to it that is both raucously satirical and--well,  almost oceanically high-serene.  Much of the other illumagery in  LAFT is "stylish," but nearly all of it thumbs its nose at  gentility, and High Art, and explores the same visceral, less-  attended-to aspects of the human condition that the pieces  previously mentioned do.     The same is true of the many difficult-seeming poems in the  issue.  Some of these seem dada for the sake of being dada, and I  sympathize with those who would reject them out of hand.  But I'm  not convinced that any of them is dada only.  What they have that  such poems lack are two or more of the following: (1) flow; (2)  an archetypal hum; (3) a wide range of vocabulary and imagery;  and (4) a low cliche-to-fresh- phraseology ratio.  By "flow" I  mean mostly such old-fashioned qualities as rhythm and  melodiousness; by "archetypal hum" I mean intimations of some  large universal archetype like Spring, Ocean, or the Mating  Instinct.     Take, for instance, the very first poem in LAFT, Michael Dec's,  "Fish Nut."  Its first two lines, "A bicycle in paradise - blue  vinyl boots a fluorescent ceiling/ nails popping out," indicate a  level beyond raw dada.  It at least flirts with archetypality  (due to the reference to paradise), and it flows pleasantly  through b-sounds, l-sounds, c-sounds.  It's without either  cliches or unusually fresh phraseology but its vocabulary and  imagery start vivid and widen as the poem continues--and  eventually makes sense as an evocation of Macbethan futility, its  final two lines being, "The tomorrow and tomorrow/ Think yrself  into a corner."     A later poem by Jake Berry, "American Frame," begins: "You need a  tongue! You need a rang spangler?/ Terse scrolls tighten the  diaphragm into a/ coiled grin."  "Rang spangler" seems fresh to  me, but the poem's freshest phrase occurs when it speaks at its  very end of "a curse with/ a menu."  This alone (I can just see a  tuxedoed curse proffering an elegant menu and inquiring of his  victim which of the many downfalls listed on it he would prefer)  would be enough to keep me coming back to the poem, but it is  high on all the other scales, too (and turns out to be rousingly  negative about our foreign policy-- to each other as well as to  other countries).     Dadaesque poetry is not the only kind of literature in LAFT.  It  also boasts some fine pluraesthetic pieces such as a design by  Luigi-Bob Drake in which repetitions of the word, "HELIX," are  used to represent a strand of DNA; an excerpt from Geof Huth's  deviously simple ABC book, Analphabet; a similarly simple-seeming  treatment of a pig, fly, and rose by David Chikhiadze; several  ever-unsettling illuscriptations by Larry Tomoyasu (one of them  depicting a banana-nosed face that is captioned, "PERSONAL/  PROBATE PETITION"), and many other similarly intriguing pieces.     Not to forget Al Ackerman's regular feature, "Ack's Wacks."  This  issue's installment is called, "More Burgeoning Teat Madness."  It concerns an idle Sunday its typically matter-of-fact  Ackermanian narrator spends at a friend's bookstore.  For a while  he amuses himself playing "the belt game," a preposterously  brutal diversion in which he, the bookstore-owner, and a third  man take turns walloping a fourth man on the romp with a belt.  The latter, who is required to shut his eyes during the game, has  to guess who struck him after each wallop to escape further  punishment.  Having recently had a mental breakdown that prevents  him from saying anything but, "trout- flavored," however, he is  never able to.  At length, the game bores the narrator and he  starts looking through various books.  His insight, triggered by  a line about teats that he comes across in a John O'Hara novel,  has to do with the line's re-use in various literary classics  (like Camus's The Stranger) to pep them up.    Elsewhere, a sketch of a geek by Ackerman further indicates the  LAFT-brand of humor; in it a frowningly serious but glowingly  pleased-with-himself geek is saying into a phone, "Hi-yo,  Silver, and away."  Which seems as good a line for me to say  good-bye on as any.  One last note for un- or seldom-published  writers and illustrators, though: LAFT is exceptionally open to  the work of unknowns.  If you think your work is weird enough,  give it a try!

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Column004 — December 1993 « POETICKS

Column004 — December 1993

 
 

 
 
 
 

Visual Poetry Today

 

 


Small Magazine Review, Volume 1, Number 7, December 1993


 
     Core: A symposium on Contemporary Visual Poetry A Special Issue of
     Generator Magazine in conjunction with Score Press, Summer, 1993;
     156pp.; 8139 Midland Road Mentor OH 44060. $6.


A couple of years ago I and some 200 other visual poets  throughout the world received copies of a 2-page questionnaire  from Crag Hill and John Byrum, poet/editors of magazines highly-  regarded in the field. About half the questionnaire concerned  visual poetry as a career; the rest had to do with its nature and  function.  Hill and Byrum got responses from some sixty poets,  mostly North Americans but with a sprinkling of Europeans and  South Americans (some of whose responses are in their native  tongues).  These they've now published as Core.    This is important for everyone interested in visual poetry, for  there has been no large-scale compilation of commentary on the  genre since 1978 when Peter Mayer and Bob Cobbing brought out  concerning concrete poetry in England--and no compilation ever  with material from so many practitioners.  It should also be of  interest to the world outside the narrow confines of visual  poetry as a fairly full-scale overview-from-within of what it's  like to be an otherstream artist in the contemporary Western  World.     As an amateur psychologist, I found it fun to divide the  respondents into "rigidniks" and "freewenders", the former  conscientiously trying to answer the questions as directly and  fully as possible, the latter wending widely, and wildly, astray.  Among the rigidniks I put Karl Kempton (whose contribution has 34  footnotes), myself, Geof Huth, Wharton Hood, David Cole, John M.  Bennett, Jonathan Brannen.  More fun are such freewenders as  Andrew Russ, who--under a pseudonym--defines poetry as a capital  I, and visual poetry as a dotted capital I, then answers the rest  of the questionnaire with various arrangements of i's--and eyes;  Avelino De Araujo, who does similar things with a little circle;  and Bill DiMichele, who simply overprints the questionnaire with  what appears to be two pieces of scrap paper, heavily splotched,  and with part of some kind of educational hand-out text on one of  them.  There are also Spencer Selby, whose answers consist of  amusingly pertinent found graphics--like a drawing of a little  girl at the top of a ladder trying to reach the bottom limbs of a  tree as an answer to a question concerning whether or not the  government should subsidize visual poetry; and Daniel Davidson,  whose response consists of a page containing a boxed text that  says "NONONONONON/ONONONONON/..." on one side and a similarly  boxed text on the other side that says, "ONONONONONO/NONONONONON/..."  So Core is, among other things, an intriguing collection of  visual poems.     The respondents took three positions on the nature of visual  poetry: (1) who cares; (2) it is just about any form of art that  combines text and graphics; and (3) it is a rigorously  ascertainable subset of the preceding whose characteristics vary  slightly from critic to critic.  The first two were by far the  most popular of these.  My (abridged) answer to those who took  position 1 is simple: all intelligent people care, because to  define is to make meaningful communication possible, and  communication is sharing, which is A Good Thing.     Karl Young, I think, stated the second position best: "Visual  poetry is a type of poetry that depends to a significant degree  on its visual form.  It cannot be fully understood if read aloud  to someone who can't see it, no matter how many times it is read,  or how it is read, or explained, or glossed."  Except that I'd  use "experienced" in place of "understood" (because I think it  possible for one person to tell another enough about something  visual for the latter to understand it without having to see it),  this seems sensible.  But it can't deal well with such mixtures  of the verbal and visual as illustrated poems and collages whose  textual matter everyone would agree is poetic.  Poems with fancy  lettering (can mere calligraphy make an ordinary poem a visual  one?), and paintings that have minor bits of text in them (that  someone somewhere might contend are poetic) would present  problems for it as well.  In short, it's too loose for me.     That's why I for a long time worked out of position 3, defining a  visual poem as a mix of verbal and visual matter whose visual  matter acts as a significant metaphor for its main verbal matter.  This hasn't caught on.  Consequently, I've backed into position  2--and made up the term "illumapoetry" from "illumagery," my word  for visual art, and "poetry" to stand for combinations of verbal  and metaphorically-active visual matter.  This, I know, will  never catch on!     As for the function of visual poetry, my impression is that the  respondents mostly agreed with Geof Huth that "visual poetry, as  art, brings pleasure to the world--pleasure different from that  possible through other artforms," though some would add remarks  like Harry Polkinhorn's that "visual poetry should promote clear  thinking and fresh perception, always needed in the world we  inhabit."     From others of the conscientious replies we learn (without  surprise) that just about no one makes any money from visual  poetry.  This doesn't seem to faze any of the contributors to  Core, though I'm sure that most of them have a normal amount of  extra-aesthetic ambition and hope, as I do, to one day become  established--without becoming establishment.  It will be  interesting to see if so substantive a publication as Core will  be much of a step toward Credibility in the Big World for visual  poetry.  If the volume starts getting cited by the academics (as  I notice some of Richard Kostelanetz's long disregarded essays on  the avant garde are now beginning to be with an almost frightening  alacrity, if not yet with much genuine comprehension), and inspires  follow-up anthologies of various kinds, visual poetry could at last  enter the mainstream.  If so, it will be fascinating to see if  it then becomes the first movement to avoid the defensive tunnel-  vision of all previous literary establishments.

 

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Column016 — September 1995 « POETICKS

Column016 — September 1995

 

 

Dear Whomever

 


 Small Press Review, Volume 27, Number 9, September 1995


 
 
 
     W’ORCs, ALOUD ALLOWED, Vol. 10, Nos. 1, 2 & 3,
     January, February and March 1995; 24 pp., each;
     Box 27309, Cincinnati OH 45227. $36/yr.


As 1995 began, I had such a stack of unanswered letters (over 50) that I decided to summarize what was going on with me in a form letter of the kind many people write to friends and relatives at Christmas. It bothered me to do it because a letter, for me, is usually very one-on-one, but I was desperate. I needn’t have worried, though, for I almost immediately, without really thinking about it, began to answer my correspondents personally, one after the other, instead of all at somehow once. To orient on-listeners, I preceded each answer with brief notes about the letter I was replying to, and its author.

This, of course, was just like writing 50 or more separate letters–except that I didn’t have to repeat information: once I’d told Harry, say, about my one-time near-love Susan, I didn’t need to repeat the story to everybody else I replied to. (Susan had recently phoned me from San Diego, ten years and two electro- shock treatments [hers, not mine] after we’d last seen each other. When I didn’t immediately accept her offer to come share my Florida home, she started a correspondence with a stranger who was serving time and married him a month later though she’d never to that point seen him in person. It didn’t turn out well: she panicked on the eve of his first scheduled out-of-jail conjugal visit, and divorced him. “All of a sudden it hit me,” said she.

“He’s a felon! I can’t have him in my house!” She dropped me as a correspondent due to the insufficiency of my celebration of her restored availability, so I don’t know if she ever got back with the convict or not.)

The letter was fun to write, and besides the poop on Susan and other bits of personal gossip included responses to poems and drawings various correspondents had sent me, some wacked-out philosophizing about Art and the Unconscious, a defense of one of my mathematical poems, and so on. When I finally finished it, it was something like 8,000 words long.

The response to it was satisfying. It boggled the few people I wasn’t all that interested in writing to out of replying, and seemed to entertain the others. A couple of recipients even reviewed it in zines they edited! Perhaps the most flattering result was Ralph LaCharity’s reprinting something like three- quarters of it in his zine, W’ORCs. This was quite a surprise to me, though I knew he liked to publish letters in W’ORCs.

LaCharity also responded at length to what I’d said in my letter to him personally, starting Very Perceptively with words about my “evoking of the pith & breadth of Otherstream Praxis.” He also favorably mentioned the author’s explanations with which I sometimes accompany the crazier poems I get published–as in a recent issue of Juxta, whose editors are trying to encourage such help-for-readers, so many of its poems being decidedly off-putting in their strayngeness.

Then LaCharity ascended to a self-exegesis of his own “Rupan,” an essay/letter in an earlier issue of WORC’s that I’d spent a few words in my letter on. LaCharity might be as nuts as I am. He certainly pulled out all the stops in describing how his (and my) kind of poetry dons “in its radical outwelling: the Hummed, the Mimed, the Written, the Diagrammed, the Encoded, the Concretized, the Mumbled & the Recorded, the Algorhythmized & the Amplified, the Drumbed & the EverDanced, that which is Accompanied & Collabial & Simultaned, on & on . . .” Much of his inspiration, he pointed out, comes from Jack Foley’s prime, priming, reflections on the shallowness of conceiving poetry as something written on a page only. The manner in which LaCharity is achieving his own main goal, “How to Tongue MultiValently” is clear from such lines as “dreamerrily omphalo star-fishery’d y shell-tonic” from “Rupan” itself. It was a Yow of the First Order to have triggered such a brave rant from so valuable a culturateur as he.

I had been meaning to review W’ORCs here even before LaCharity’s pr move on my behalf, for it’s just the kind of stapled-in-the-corner lit zine that I most enjoy calling attention to. Read, I’m sure, by just about no one in the mainstream media, or in academia, but twenty years or more closer to what’s going on in literature today than they are, it’s also good breezy fun, full of news about readings past and upcoming, gossip, and poetics. It also reprints all kinds of poems and other artworks from other zines, and as far as I can tell, covers the full range of poetry in English today.

Some of the reprinting is (I’m sure) sardonic, such as the copy of a dominant-mode piece of plaintext verse by James Laughlin from the New Yorker that reflects on “the happy shouts of children/ Romping from room to room,” that’s in the March issue.

Much better poems are printed in the issue and the other two under review, such as January’s excerpts from Jake Berry’s Brambu Drezi, Part Two and Jim Leftwich’s Khawatir, which LaCharity thinks rhymes with Brambu somehow, and I agree. Think a moment on Berry’s “independent attractors/ & their shadow knowledge” on a page with six occurences of the word “idylye” stacked in the lower left corner; the page swarms with chemistry, archaeology, and “Pan, joyously electric, dancing hoof and cunt in paradise.” Does Berry mean “shadow-knowledge,” or knowledge that is but some greater essence’s shadow? Berry’s work is intimidatingly noisy, but teems with questions the blood can exult in, like the preceding. Leftwich rhymes with Berry by focusing also on existence’s shadow knowledge, and doing so in a world in which “particular means prayer” and one views it with “the eating eye” and other similarly aptly misused senses. Their two poetries are unconfusably their own in form and style, but one in the elations they dance out of. The wonderful thing about W’ORCs is the inclusion with Berry’s and Leftwich’s poetry letters about it from them, with LaCharity’s equally charged feedback. Also in the January issue is a pertinent essay by Jack Foley, “Light, Breath, and the Empty Page.” Foley, I suspect, is the clearest critic writing about this stuff; certainly he’s clearer than I!

The February W’ORCs has some fine material, too, including an essay by Ron Silliman on “Wild Form” that but wrong-headed, because he claims that “form” is “structure that proves generative and inherent” rather than mere “pattern, exoskeletal reiteration.” But the latter, objectively, is what form is; to claim that only “good” scaffolding qualifies as form, as Silliman seems to, is simply to subjectify form for political purposes, something the language poets are too wont to do. Nonetheless, his essay is a great read. There’s a fine rant by Ron Androla in the same issue. I wish I had space to discuss it, and the excellent poems (often much more straight-forward than Berry’s and Leftwich’s) that are also in the issues I’ve skimmed over for you here. To find out more about them, you’ll just have to writer LaCharity.

 

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Grumman Versus Price Re: Shakespeare

28 November 2009

I’ve always found Diana Price’s Shakespeare’s Unorthodox Biography a fascinating book. I’ve even read it all the way through twice, writing notes on its pages as I did so, and I’ve reread many pages of it since.  In my own book on the authorship controversy, I mentioned it a number of times, devoting 16 pages to its bizarre method of evaluating evidence in an appendix to the first edition of my book.  Needless to say, I also argued in many threads here and elsewhere on the Internet about it.  Not being a Crowley, I did find a few of its arguments reasonable though far from persuasive.  But I found the bulk of them foolish at best, and more often than not incredibly flawed.  Since I’m the sort who enjoys dismantling wacks’ theories and believes it advances the cause of truth to do so, I spent a fair amount of time getting together a critique of it.

But, as happens with too many of my projects, I got side-tracked, and never got anything of consequence concerning it done other than the appendix.  I’ve a yearning to give it another try, though, thanks to the wack who recently claimed that there was no paper trial for Shakespeare, one of Price’s central delusions.  Ergo, I’m beginning this thread as a sort of notebook for reactions against or in defense of Shakespeare’s Unorthodox Biography.  I plan to dump ll my thoughts about the book into it, a little at a time, two or three times a week.  I hope others will join me.

1.  Price becomes an Anti-Stratfordian.

In her introduction, Price “was surprised to find nothing in Schoenbaum’s William Shakespeare: A Compact Documentary Life “to prove that Shakespeare had written any plays.  Prior to that she claims, as so many wacks do, that she had always taken it for granted that Will wrote the plays attributed to him–until she investigated the matter.  This may be the truth, but I’ve heard that her father was an Oxfordian. 

What establishes Price on her very first page as a probable propagandist, however, is that she claims not to have found anything in Schoenbaum’s book that PROVED rather than established beyond reasonable doubt that Shakespeare was a playwright.  The latter is all that historical data can ever do, but Price wants her readers thinking something is wrong with the case for Shakespeare if it can’t be proven that he was a playwright.

In the paragraph she writes immediately after the one in which she tells about
Shoenbaum’s book, Price begins lying.  “Fact after fact stopped me in my tracks,” she says.  “No biography could account for Shakespeare’s education.  His own children grew up functionally illiterate.  Shakespeare retired to an illiterate household at the height of his resumed literary powers.  He wrote nothing during the last several years of his life.  He left behind dozens of biographical records, but unlike those surviving for other writers of he day, not one of them suggests literary activity.”

Okay, when I accuse Price of “lying,” I may be exaggerating.  She is doing two things: (1) stating something as a truth that is not a truth or (2) stating  something in such a way as misleadingly to suggest something that may or may not be true were its historical context.  Call either of these some form of not-lying if you must, but to me they are lying. 

For instance, when she tells us “no biography could account for Shakespeare’s education,” she is guilty of (2) because she is misleadingly suggesting that Shakespeare has no (formal) education.  She leaves out the historical context, which is that no records exist for Shakespeare’s formal education–NOR for anyone else during his boyhood who went to his hometown grammar school, or, for that matter, to many others.  As a propagandist, she doesn’t want the reader to know the historical context of her statement because she wants him to fall for what is an implicit lie: that Shakespeare had no formal education. 

She is wrong, to boot: I’m sure most, or all, of the Shakespeare biographies she read DID account for his education by informing the reader that there was a free grammar school a few hundred feet from his house where his father, a prosperous businessman would probably have sent him.  The bottom line here is that we don’t know for sure if Shakespeare was formally educated or not because of lack of data.  Hence, it is a lie to say or suggest either that he did or did not; one can only say that it is likely that he did (since his funerary monument said he could write, and he had a documented acting career which strong suggests he could read scripts).

I suspect Price was not “stopped in her tracks” when she found out all the attendance records of the grammar school Shakespeare probably attended during his time and for many years before and after that have disappeared.  Time devours records.  So, another probable lie.

Very close to a definite lie is her assertion that “his children grew up functionally illiterate.”  We have two signatures from one of them, Susanna, who married a physician and was considered unusually wise (at least according to her tombstone).  One record suggests to some that she was shown her husband’s handwriting but failed to recognize it as his, which Price considers evidence of illiteracy.  But it is not.  Furthermore, the likelihood is that she did no more than glance at the handwriting, if she looked at it, at all.
(She was shown a book said to be her husband’s because the man showing it to her recognized its handwriting as her husband’s; she denied the book was by him; that says nothing about her literacy.)  One can certainly reasonably claim that it’s possible Susanna was functionally illiterate, but we lack sufficient data to assert, as Price does, that she definitely was.  To do that is to lie.

Ditto Price’s assertion that Shakespeare’s household was illiterate. His father signed with a mark but so did

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