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Entry 357 — The Smugness of Wilshberians

Monday, January 24th, 2011

To keep posting a daily entry, here’s a post I wrote a month-and-a-half ago in response to David Graham, who near-perfectly personifies the Wilshberian:

Let’s run a bit with the sports analogy. Wilshberia as Bob tends to define it would not just include the major & minor leagues of pro baseball, but every single college, high school, middle school, and community league. Plus sandlot games, softball at company picnics & family reunions.  Fathers playing catch with kids in the back yard, too, of course.  Oh, and naturally all games overseas, not to mention computer baseball games & fantasy leagues.

What wouldn’t the label encompass?

Well, such things as two guys in Havre, Montana who like to kick a deer skull back & forth and call it “baseball.”  Sure, there’s no bat, ball, gloves, diamond, fans, pitcher, or catcher– but they do call it baseball, and wonder why the mainstream media consistently fails to mention their game.

Our minds seem to be running in parallel, David.  I was just thinking that the reason no academics have or can come up with a (better) term for Wilshberia (which they consider derogatory although I consider it descriptive) is that they think it the whole of poetry, so not needing a name.  In other words, for them the range of poetry from Wilbur’s to Ashbery’s is the complete range of poetry.  And people like me, who compose things we think are poems but which are considerably different from anything Wilshberian poets are composing should not mind being considered no more poets than “two guys in Havre, Montana who like to kick a deer skull back & forth” are baseball players.

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Entry 357 — The Smugness of Wilshberians

Monday, January 24th, 2011

To keep posting a daily entry, here’s a post I wrote a month-and-a-half ago in response to David Graham, who near-perfectly personifies the Wilshberian:

Let’s run a bit with the sports analogy. Wilshberia as Bob tends to define it would not just include the major & minor leagues of pro baseball, but every single college, high school, middle school, and community league. Plus sandlot games, softball at company picnics & family reunions.  Fathers playing catch with kids in the back yard, too, of course.  Oh, and naturally all games overseas, not to mention computer baseball games & fantasy leagues.

What wouldn’t the label encompass?

Well, such things as two guys in Havre, Montana who like to kick a deer skull back & forth and call it “baseball.”  Sure, there’s no bat, ball, gloves, diamond, fans, pitcher, or catcher– but they do call it baseball, and wonder why the mainstream media consistently fails to mention their game.

Our minds seem to be running in parallel, David.  I was just thinking that the reason no academics have or can come up with a (better) term for Wilshberia (which they consider derogatory although I consider it descriptive) is that they think it the whole of poetry, so not needing a name.  In other words, for them the range of poetry from Wilbur’s to Ashbery’s is the complete range of poetry.  And people like me, who compose things we think are poems but which are considerably different from anything Wilshberian poets are composing should not mind being considered no more poets than “two guys in Havre, Montana who like to kick a deer skull back & forth” are baseball players.

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Entry 1203 — More Boilerplate About Academics

Wednesday, September 4th, 2013

According to Gary Soto’s bio, his poem, “Oranges,” is the most antho-logized poem in contemporary literature.  When Jim Finnegan reported this to New-Poetry, I replied, “Sounds like something an academic would say after checking six or seven mainstream anthologies.  I may be wrong, but I doubt anyone can say what poem is more antholo-gized than any other, mainly because I don’t think anyone can know about all the anthologies published.”

Jerry McGuire responded to this and that resulted a little while ago (3 P.M.) in the following:

On 9/4/2013 2:41 PM, Jerry McGuire wrote:

Bob, does it really take an academic to persuade you that a particular instance doesn’t prove a general claim? Even averaging things out, I suspect, people who write poetry for their own purposes–which are enormously varied and not in dispute–don’t strike me as “more adventurous” though I can’t for the life of me figure out what kind of “adventure” you have in mind) than academics who write poetry, some of whom are conservative, some middle-of-the-road, and some well out there beyond the fringe. If you mean, by the way, that academic writers are more likely to respect more elements of the history of poetry and include a greater historical variety among their preferences, perhaps I’d agree with you, intuitively, but I can’t prove it and I doubt you can either. As for “academics are in charge of poetry, and I include many people not employed by colleges as academics.  An academic is, by my definition, by innate temperament, an automatic defender of the status quo,” your definition strikes me as self-serving and petty. What you know about my “innate temperament” (“for instance”?) hardly qualifies you to determine what’s “automatic” in my preferences, loves, hates, and particular decisions. As so often, you seem to be nurturing some sort of long grudge, and using the list to air your brute generalizations. Some of us do read these things, you know.  And while crude prejudices don’t hurt my feelings–hardened over the years by the contempt of 18-year-olds for their elders–they sadden and disappoint me.

Jerry

On 9/4/2013 1:01 PM, Bob Grumman wrote:

I would claim that academics are much less adventurous (for good or bad) than non-academics–in general.  Compare, for instance, the anthology that I would edit if allowed to the anthology David Graham would.  Or, hey, compare the one he did edit (on conversational poetry, if my memory hasn’t completely died) with one I edited (on visual poetry).  Ignoring which was better (and believe it or not, I would certainly be willing to say they were equal but different in spite of my preference for the poems in mine), consider only which would be considered more adventurous.

Jerry, I used a particular instance to illustrate a general claim.  Maybe if I was able to find everything I’ve written on the subject, I could present a fairly persuasive case for my academic/non-academic division but I’m not, so for now will simply have to leave my opinion as just another Internet unsupporthesis.  I’ll not be able to get into what adventurous is, either, except to say that Columbus was more adventurous than Captain Shorehugger because he went where none or almost none went while the cap’n went where many had been.  The comparison holds even if the latter had found many things of value that had been overlooked by other shorehuggers (which is what the best academics are good at) and Columbus had sunk a hundred miles west of the Azores.

(Note, I can’t lose this argument because I define those you would call academics who are “well out there beyond the fringe as non-academics” since I believe that one employed by a college isn’t necessarily an academic, John M. Bennett and Mike Basinski, two Ph.D. college librarians [but neither of them with any clout at all in the poetry establishment] being cases in point.)

modestly yours, the World’s SUPREME Poventurerer

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 Jerry also wrote:

As for “academics are in charge of poetry, and I include many people not employed by colleges as academics.  An academic is, by       my definition, by innate temperament, an automatic defender of the status quo,” your definition strikes me as self-serving and petty. What you know about my “innate temperament” (“for instance”?)hardly qualifies you to determine what’s “automatic” in my preferences, loves, hates, and particular decisions. As so often, you seem to be nurturing some sort of long grudge, and using the list to air your brute generalizations. Some of us do read these things, you know. And while crude prejudices don’t hurt my feelings–hardened over the years by the contempt of 18-year-olds for their elders–they sadden and disappoint me.

Jerry

in a second post, I wrote:

I skipped the above, mistaking it for just a repeat of what I’d said in my post. I definitely have a long grudge, but when you ask what I know about your innate temperament, I’m afraid a possibly over-sensitive buzzer of yours made you take my words as personal.  If you read what I say with care, you will see that I say nothing that would indicate that I consider you an academic, by my definition.  I would say offhand that you are surely more of an academic than I.  From what I’ve read of what you’ve written, I am sure, too, that you are much less of an academic, by my definition, than the people at the top of the poetry establishment.  Just as I am, from some points of view, a terrible academic, since I believe artworks with no words of aesthetic significance cannot be poetry; that a good poem HAS to have some unifying principle (although it may be very difficult to discover and may even be chaos), that what I call otherstream poetry is just a different kind of poetry, not a better kind; that literary criticism is as valuable as poetry; and many other opinions.

Now for a little snarkiness: the belief that academic are not automatic defenders of the status quo is as crude as the belief that they are.  And my belief that the majority of those making a living in college English departments are automatic defenders of the status quo is not a prejudice but the result of quite a bit of study and thought, however misguide others may think it.  So there. True, an academic study of academics would be helpful if thorough and honest.  How about a comparison of all the poetry critics on a list of poetry critics with writings in publications almost everyone would agree are mainstream, like Poetry and The New Yorker and those on a list of those who have written a reasonably large amount of poetry criticism just about never in such publications–like I.  You could include the language poetry critics active before 1990, when language poetry became what I called “acadominant,” meaning widely accepted by academics as important, even by the many against–who showed they thought it important by campaigning against it.  It proved me right by being confirmed as the right edge of Wilshberia around 1900 with the acceptance of a language poet into the American academy of poets, and mainstream anthologies of language poetry. Something of the sort will eventually be done, but not for several decades, I suspect.

–Bob

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Entry 941 — Pronouncements and Blither, Part 3

Monday, December 3rd, 2012

An acadumbot had asserted that some poet his very commercially-oriented small press had published was one of the recent NEA grant winners. Countering a post of mine doubting that anyone doing otherstream work would have much chance of winning such a grant, he said her work was “experimental.” When I asked him to say why it was, he told me to use Google to find out.  After I snapped back at him about his being satisfied with empty assertions, I got into a more intelligent discussion with Jerry McGuire and Barry Spacks.  Barry started it off (yesterday) with a complaint:

“Not to rein on Ms. Mangold’s euphormium-moment (Mangold being the poet described as experimental by the acadumbot I mentioned), but it happens to summon my hobbyhorse, so I mount up again (we each have our own, Bob) — namely to cite poetry’s Gresham’s Law, that impossibly arbitrary stuff that’s passed off — God knows why — as the brave new thing drives out work of actual value such as Wilbur’s and Ashbery’s Great Experiments.  Proof? Proof lies in the fact that It’s just so unspeakably easy to mix up a word salad and sit back awaiting the prize.  I’d bet there’s not a single person on this list who couldn’t, in 3 minutes, run up a jump-cut piece at least as good (i.e. bad) as the me-me self-indulgencies that often pass for meriting attention in our perverse day.  Poor poetry — talk about The Art of Sinking!  Or, to put it in a more prize-winning way:

Three Minutes by Clock Driving the Ghost of A. Pope Nuts
man gold gal gold echestamy
warrants the B-cleft glockinspiel —
hath reverence then a zealand smirk
on the upper West side? or in excelsis?
‘Zads, Mary, taunt the tale in creatures, Joyce’s Christ!
Do not impale the rectuary, do not
o-noble me, sly shrubbery,
quontom-phantom heliovort!
I come to bury Ceasar, and in my day,
I maketh the sweats in thirds,
do offer up yon plangent potato
please, please relequate the nose factor
can’t somebody give an ahem?
(no time left, but that’s just because
Google went so slow on the spelling checks
and 3 minutes is really hardtack, Jeb).

“Send the check to the Belize address.

“with a song in my heart, Barry”

Jerry replied to this as follows:

“My teacher, Al Cook, in talking about Koch’s Wishes, Lies, and Dreams (it’s a book about teaching kids to write poetry, for those of you it missed), used to say that if you tell ten-year-olds often enough (rewarding them the while) that “My sister is a rubber moon” is something good for them, they’ll crank out that kind of line by the bushel. But Al never suggested that surrealism was therefore self-evidently bad. You can’t be saying, Barry (can you?) that what you’re calling “jump-cut” pieces can’t be any good because many of them are bad, right? That there’s no difference between Clark Coolidge’s bizarreries and your awkward little sprint? (Or did you have a slight twinge, there, when I called it “awkward”? Maybe some small part of you believes that the skills you’ve developed over the years must make  your effort actually worth a second look?)

“I mean, most of us can also crank out a dozen lines of rhymed verse (as John Ciardi pointed out years ago in distinguishing poetry from “poesy”). That doesn’t mean that rhyming or other dimensions of sound-play are a dead end, I think–just that it ordinarily takes years of practice (and don’t get me started on that hack, Rimbaud!) to synchronize the ear and brain to any technical resource: rhyme, enjambment, shape-on-the-page, syntactic disruption, font color, extra-linguistic symbol, multilingual portmanteaux, etc. Really, Barry, I can’t Belize you!”

Then I said, “Jerry, I think the difference between the anybodies writing crappy rhyming verse and the anybodies writing crappy jump-cut verse is that the former aren’t getting published and reviewed in the mainstream, and the latter are—along with the few jump-cut poets who sometimes write good poems (but also get away with pretty bad ones) like Ashbery. I wouldn’t call Coolidge’s stuff jump-cut, by the way, but don’t know his large ouevre well enough to say he doesn’t do it Your hobbyhorse is a secondary hobbyhorse of mine, Barry—some jump-cut stuff is terrific, and even conventional poems can profit by judicious use of the jump-cut, but there seem to be a great many poets just irresponsibly throwing words and asemic texts together with or without graphics and winning attention. Few consider my call for a poem’s having a unifying principle anything but a sort of fascism.

“I think the Mangold poem is reasonably unified, although not as unified as I’d prefer. But there are books full of what Barry calls word salads, published and reviewed by mainstreamers.”

Jerry: “Yeah, in fact, Bob, I’m not comfortable with the jump-cut terminology. It comes from film, where the continuity of one’s identification with the cinematically-constructed gaze (what the camera “sees,” usually through a perspective borrowed from an onscreen character) is suddenly disrupted in ways that violate ordinary perceptual expectations–we’re precipitated, outside ordinary spatial and/or temporal possibility, into another cinematically-constructed gaze. That’s quite a bit different, cognitively (though film critics like to talk about its operations as part of film’s grammar) from the variety of linguistic operations involved in

“Ashbery’s or Coolidge’s referential, syntactical, or identificatory continuities. (The ancients [as always] had a word for such stuff, by the way: anacoluthon, in which a sentence veers within itself from one grammatical structure to a different one.)

“As for your idea that legions of minor-league Ashbery’s are dominating poetry publication and prizes, I’d say two things: (1) I don’t believe it; I believe that most poetry published and rewarded with prizes is still more middle-diction than Ashberian, Coolidgean, or Rimbaudesque; and (2) to the extent (fairly limited, I think) that more such poetry is being published and rewarded, it’s a sign of a gesture towards a paradigm shift, as what seemed baffling and antipoetic thirty years ago accumulates acolytes until it edges first towards a kind of scruffy respectability and then downright normalcy. Maybe in 2167 everyone will be complaining that the stodgy old math poets are hogging the prizes.

“As for crappy this and crappy that, sour grapes.

“And a confession, of sorts: for about twenty years now I’ve been exploring (“experimenting with,” I’d say) stategies of disrupting diction, syntax, reference, phonology, etc. that, twenty-five years ago, I had only the barest awareness of, and that only slowly and grudgingly became part of my repertoire, and that, when I realized what I was doing, took shape in my work in ways that now seem crabbed, amateurish, and even embarrassing, but that, eventually, began to reveal to me dimensions of my language and experience that I don’t think I could have discovered in any other way–I want to emphasize the “me”s, “my”s, and “I”s in that clause–until I’m at last proud (probably over-proud) of a body of work that I produced under that impulse and that, finally, after scores of submissions, rejections, rewritings, and reorganizations, will be published in the spring. Even if you (or Barry, or anyone else) doesn’t like it (and I realize that that’s beside the point, and so should you), it’s very clear to me that I’ve wrestled with my own limitations, used certain technical resources to expand my capabilities, and been true to the impulse that got me into this stinking difficult art in the first place. So I’m saying that this casual dismissal of mechanical troping–what you’re calling “jump-cut poetry”–seems to me to miss the point entirely: that some people work very hard to get it right, even if some people don’t, or don’t seem to; and far from being easier to master just because it seems easier to approximate, the fact that anyone can scramble semantics or syntax in a casual way (and remember, anyone can put sentences together, too! that doesn’t mean it’s easy to write a novel) may make it _harder_ to see the value in trying to do that in ways that press towards the expression of hard-to-speak parts of our experience.”

Me, again: “Thanks for as-ever thoughtful comment, Jerry. I think you misread me a little, and I disagree with you about some things, but not up, right now, to a full response, just a few quick thoughts, but I hope to return for more.

“I’m uncomfortable with jump-cut terminology, too, but can’t think or or find better. I mean it specifically for poetry that jumps completely out of a train of a developing train of thought into a seemingly entirely different one, not what anacoluthon is a term for, in my understanding of it. It has nothing to do with linguistics but with narrative. Narrative in a wide sense that would include adventures of a concept, perhaps. This is not an area I’ve given what I would call proper scholar attention, just something I needed to know something about to get my taxonomy of poetry right. Anacoluthon seems something pertinent to language poetry, which I consider very different from what I call jump-cut poetry.

“I may have given the impression of speaking of “legions of minor-league Ashberys,” but I’m only speaking of a visible portion of Wilshberia that I’ve been noticing as a reviewer, and here at New-Poetry that’s becoming stronger and stronger. Certainly the ratio of  published&reviewed&rewarded Iowa plaintext poetry, which still dominates Wilshberia, to published&reviewed&rewarded Ashbery-influenced poetry is much lower than the ratio of the latter to what I call otherstream poetry.

“I reject the idea that I suffer from sour grapes: resentment is not the same as jealousy. I used “crappy” simply as a tag for “inferior,” and I believe almost everyone would agree that some inferior poetry is being published&reviewed&rewarded.

“Seems I’m making a semi-full response, after all, so will keep going. Aside from wishing you luck with your book (and saying I will definitely be looking forward to reading it), I only want to say that I, for one, am not guilty of ‘casual dismissal of mechanical troping—what (I’m) calling jump-cut poetry,’ for I consider it a highly important kind of poetry equal to visual poetry, and more important than Iowa plaintext poetry because that’s just a school, and subclass of free verse (or whatever my taxonomy calls it, which I can’t remember). I’m just expressing resentment of those using it (poorly, in my view) to fast-lane into prominence, because it is definitely the top intellectually fashionable kind of poetry now, however more popular among middle-brow poetry-lovers Iowa plaintext poetry remains.

“And now a small wail at my stronger and stronger realization, after observing how little I’ve said above, that I probably won’t ever put together the book I want to write to clarify all my thinking on the varieties of poetry.”

Nothing new posted to this discussion since then

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Entry 834 — More of My Boilerplate at New-Poetry

Saturday, August 18th, 2012

On 8/15/2012 7:42 AM, bob grumman wrote:

Perhaps it’s wrong of me to be bothered by a mainstream critic’s being ignorant of or indifferent to the only significant thing I believe has happened in American poetry over the past century, the discovery and increasingly interesting use of (relatively) new techniques, but I am.

Sent: Wednesday, August 15, 2012 2:31 PM
Subject: Re: [New-Poetry] Hass’ What Light Can Do: Essays on Art,Imagination and the Natural World
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Of course it’s not “wrong,” Bob–by all means, be bothered.
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I still don’t have time for you, Jerry, but I’m going to reply, anyway! (Feel honored.)
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Me, I’m inclined to write my own manifesto, “On Indifference” (let’s make it a book-length piece, On Indifference and Other Life-Affirming Virtues),

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An individual can’t avoid indifference about some things (like my indifference to the squabbles of the republicrats), but no field’s establishment (and every field has one) should be indifferent about something like visual poetry that a sizable number of people in its field think is important. It took me a long time to accept language poetry (genuine language poetry such as Clark Coolidge’s) as anything but nonsense (although not as long as it took me earlier to accept free verse—although I instantly accepted Cummings’s visual poetry very early when shown what it was doing), but I finally did, because so many people to me were enthusiastic about it. Not that I can accept every poet’s work that others find terrific, but I try to. I’m still working on Gertrude Stein’s.
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taking the position that there are always people eager to pursue possibilities at the margins (or borders, or frontiers–whatever suits one’s fantasies) of any ensemble of creative forms, while others make the best of their own engagement with the history of that ensemble (including its hidden history, perhaps),

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Some even do both! At the same time! You’d never know it from reading any of the books of criticism Finnegan tells us about.
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and that there’s nothing wrong with either exploration of one’s energies. It would be important to note, in such a screed, that there are huge loads of crap deposited both at the margins and in the center.

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Definitely.
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(If I did the book-length version, I’d certainly want to include a chapter [titled “One’s Ceiling is Another’s Floor”?] about how spatial descriptions of “ensembles” is a stupid way to go about describing the antics of artists. My bad.)

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Not sure what you mean by “ensembles.”
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And there, the manifesto’s done, and I, too, lack a contract to publish it.

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I suspect you’d have any easier time getting one (from a “real” publisher) than I would for any book of mine. I was just reading about Brad Thor, a thriller writer, who was sitting next to a woman on a plane with whom he got talking literature. Toward the end of the flight, he mentioned he was thinking about writing a novel. She told him she was a salesrepresentative of Simon and Schuster, and she’d like to read his manuscript when he was done with it. He did send it to her and it got published by Simon & Schuster, and now he’s making big bucks. I can just see you or me having a conversation with the sales rep. . . .
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Oh, and the book I spoke of hoping to write on the last hundred years or so of American poetry would not be a manifesto. The changes I want are very limited: only that the Poetry Establishment notice my kind of poetry—even if they trash it. And that a poet should do his best to master every kind of poetry he can during a lengthy apprenticeship; then focus on his favorite kind, but keep in touch with as many of the other kinds as he can. Too many “advanced” poets are as foolishly indifferent to traditional poetry, particularly formal verse, as traditional poets are to visual poetry and the like.
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I thought I had a third demand of the poetry world, but can’t think of it now.
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As to “the only significant thing” (and thank goodness for that “I believe,” Bob, which feels refreshingly humane and sensible), you’ve made it fairly broad, haven’t you, by describing it as “the discovery and increasingly interesting use of (relatively) new techniques”? So whatever else you could say about really good writing (of course, my “good” is up for grabs, as much as your “interesting”) that is (ostensibly) indifferent to marginal experimentation, you couldn’t claim it was “significant” in any, uh, significant way? Well, that’s a mouthful, whether you digest it or spit it out.

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You have me there, Jerry. But it’s as much a problem with the language as with me. I was bringing up my standard belief in the difference I find between “effective” poems and “important” poems. I need different words. My point is simply that even great poems as the one by Hass you mention may be do not significantly enlarge the field of poetry because they add nothing significantly new to it. They will add a new outlook and style, since every poet has a unique outlook and style, and perhaps new subject matter. But new subject just doesn’t seem significant to me. One painter is the first to depict some new species of butterfly, so what? Or a novelist is first to tell us what the life of an Australian aborigine juggler is like. Ditto.
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I think the best examples of what I mean are in classical music: I think a case could be made for the view that Brahms’s symphonies equal in effectiveness to Beethoven’s, but Beethoven’s were far more important than Brahms’s. I prefer Richard Straus’s Der Rosenkavalier to any of Wagner’s operas (I think) but Wagner’s operas are unquestionably more important in the way I’m speaking of than Straus’s. Wagner and Beethoven advance their art, Brahms and Straus did not, they “merely” contributed brilliantly to it.
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I’ll let you know when I have the right two words or phrases needed to distinguish the two kinds of artists.
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And by the way, just as Philip Levine might be best positioned in relation to his little fantasy about Lorca meeting Hart Crane in New York, Hass is most ilmpressive for me when I think of his work as positioned relative to his beautiful poem about Mandelstam and Vallejo, “Rusia en 1931.” (I can’t find it online–it’s in _Human Wishes_ [and, since I don’t own Human Wishes, somewhere else as well–sorry that I can’t track it down right now.]) It’s full of kinds of emotion most writers are too careful to allow into their poems (someone would make a snotty crack about it in any graduate workshop), making it emerge from a subtle drift among prose statement, deep image, and a kind of journalistic impulse. It positions itself between ardent political aspirations (Vallejo) and the brutal annihilation of a unique imagination by a related political ardency (Mandelstam). And it doesn’t reduce itself to any answer of convenience: it hangs you there, caught among its ideas and forms and characterizations. It’s not the idea, exactly, that makes it so fine, and certainly not its exploration of tonal qualities caught up in manipulations of formal dynamics: it’s the overall effect (and the decision) of that hanging. Here’s the key, for me: it’s not just wistful (Hass, like a great many 20th-century poets of much less skill, can be accused of slipping more wist into his poems than is quite decorous); it’s more a sign of desperation and outrage, hung out to bleed. So when I think of Levine, Crane, and Lorca, I think: it’s great that he wrote that poem about his betters. And when I think of Hass, Vallejo, and Mandelstam, I think: they constitute a very interesting set, made available by Hass’s insight and skill.
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l suspect he made use of haiku, too. But however effective you do a good job of showing he was, he wasn’t “significant” in my special sense.

best, Bob

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Entry 1167 — Another Null Poetry Discussion

Tuesday, July 30th, 2013

What follows is a response of mine to what some academics are saying about contemporary poetry here.

What I find interesting about the discussion is how representative it is of academics’ discussions of what they take to be the State of Contemporary Poetry–wholly blind, that is, to ninety percent of the various kinds of superior innovative poetry being fashioned outside of university-certified venues–the various kinds of poetry I call “otherstream,” that is.  Perloff rather beautifully demonstrates this when she writes, “you can’t very well oppose the Penguin canon by bringing up the names of what are, outside the world of small-press and chapbook publishing, wholly unknown poets.”

Why on earth not?!  A competent, responsible critic would be able to find and list whole schools of poets “who are, outside the world of small-press and chapbook publishing, wholly unknown” and show with judicious quotation and commentary why the work of those in them is superior to 95% of the work of living poets in the Penguin.  But no, with academics it’s never the superior ignored poets and schools of superior poets that are left out of mainstream anthologies that matter, only certain favored poets already accepted by the academy that have been.

Meanwhile, needless to say, neither Perloff nor her opponent defines her terms nor provides helpful details about the poetry under discussion.  In short, one more discussion by people of limited understanding of contemporary poetry, for people with even less knowledge–presented in such a way, alas, as to convince members of the general public that they are actually finding out about the most important poetry of today.

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Entry 960 — Jump-Cut Poetry

Saturday, December 22nd, 2012

 

The following is a passage from John Cage’s “Writing for the first time through Howl” (1986) which I appropriated from Marjorie Perloff’s essay at The Boston Review website:

I think Perloff considers this a conceptual poem.  To me it’s a simple jump-cut poem, a “jump-cut” in my poetics being defined as “a movement in a text from one idea, image or the like to another with no syntactical bridge between the two.”  Thinking about it, I came to the (tentative) conclusion that there are two kinds of (effective) jump-cut poems: (1) procedure-generated ones and (2) moodscape-generated ones.  There is just one kind of ineffective jump-cut poem, ones that are neither (1) or (2).  Wholly random or essentially random because excessively hermetic crap, in other words.

While into a classifying mood, I divided All of Poetry into (1)  Subject-Centered Poetry  (what a poem is about) and (2) Technique-Centered Poetry  (how a poem is made), with “subject” defined as a combinationof the nature of the subject and the poet’s attitude toward it (tone).  Style I consider a technique.

While thinking about many of the comments at The Boston Review website about binaries, I formed one of my own: “Dichotiphobia vs. Rationality.”  Further thinking about a few of those comments, and many I’ve been assaulted by, inspired the following observation: “What I notice more and more in discussions of poetry or poetics is how many involved in them prefer not to attack opinions they oppose but the motives of those expressing those opinions.”

I don’t have a high opinion of the Cage passage, by the way.  Amusing, and occasionally a juxtapositioning makes something fun happen, but . . .   Perloff makes a big deal of its use of appropriation, and it is true that a good deal of what effectiveness it has is due to the way it procedure leads to the randomization of the order of its little locutions–which nonetheless make surprising off-the-wall sense.  This, as I suggested long ago while discussing Doris Cross, a superior employer of appropriations Perloff should be more familiar with than she seems to be, conveys a reassuring sense of Nature’s being rational, of something’s being behind it all that unifies our existence’s apparent meaninglessness.  No matter how you cut up and re-organize something like Ginsberg’s “Howl,” you’ll never get rid of words’ magical ability to mean.  Nor, analogically, of the universe’s.

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Entry 958 — A Boston Review Symposium

Thursday, December 20th, 2012

A post at New-Poetry sent me to Marjorie Perloff’s essay at the Boston Review website –no doubt not for the first time, for I vaguely remember reading it and not thinking much of it.   This time, I quite liked it.  Here’s the comment I left about it:  “I’ve always faulted Marjorie Perloff for the limited range of the poetry she writes about, but what other poetry critic read by more than a few hundred people would ever write about the poetry of John Cage, Susan Howe and Srikanth Reddy, much less write penetratingly about it as she has in this essay?

“Her choice of appropriation as a center or one of the centers of contemporary “advanced” poetry is interesting but a little off as far as I can see.  I, like Christopher M., at once thought of “The Waste Land” when Perloff began speaking of appropriation as something significantly new.  But appropriation wasn’t the key device of “The Waste Land”: textual collage was, appropriation being merely a preliminary operation required to make a collage.  The jump-cut poetry which resulted due to the influence of “The Waste Land,” which included Ashbery’s work has long been with us.

“What is notable about Susan Howe’s work is not appropriation, but her choice of kinds of material to appropriate, making her, for example, a partly visual poet at times, and it is the mixing of expressive modalities in contemporary poetry where the main action has been for many years, albeit ignored by all the certified critics but Perloff, but rarely more than mentioned in passing even by her.”

Most of the comments made by others to this post seemed to me rather stupid.  There were more at another location at the Boston Review website where the Boston Review (which I have not yet put on my list of Enemies of Poetry, but have been close to doing for quite a while) invited 18 poetry-people to:

A Symposium on the Poetic Limits of Binary Thinking

Marjorie Perloff’s essay “Poetry on the Brink” in the May/June 2012 issue rekindled conversation about innovation and canonization in contemporary poetry. To continue and extend the discussion, we cast a wide net and invited 18 poets to address the following question: what is the most significant, troubling, relevant, recalcitrant, misunderstood, or egregious set of opposing terms in discussions about poetics today, and, by extension, what are the limits of binary thinking about poetry? Their responses range from whimsy to diatribe, with meditation, appraisal, tangent, touchstone, anecdote, drollery, confection, wit, and argument in between.

My quick expectation was that the “wide net” would be from sub-mediocre to mediocre . . . but so far, after looking at just four of the contributions to the symposium, I’ve found an intelligent comment. It’s by Ange Mlinko (whom I believe to be a favorite of the Boston Review.) I did not find the comment by Vendler-certified Stephen Burt intelligent, though it prettily plays around the theme. More, I hope, soon.
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Entry 794 — Uljana Wolf’s “The Applicant [4]”

Monday, July 9th, 2012

I’m analyzing poems by poets Marjorie Perloff deems “experimental” to show how unexperimental they actually are. I find I’m also in the process learning quite a bit about the mainstream’s “cutting edge.” A lot that’s going on there is better than I thought it was–it’s just not poetically adventurous. Here’s one, which is by Uljana Wolf, a poet new to me whose work I had trouble finding on the Internet:

The Applicant [4]    blew the interview. Cracked window        over a chest too baroquely  open for business. Mollusk of rancor        in a throat saying should've  let him do the talking. Should've left        them a foretaste of the whole  amalgam. What doesn't kill me        makes me wonder. Whatever it was  must have tramped off an afternoon        laughing so hard it forgot what I looked like  with my hat down and left me        ghost of infinite back rent to pay.

This is another example of “experimental poetry” that’s nothing but one oddly not-quite-right sentence or partial sentence jump-cutting to another—but doing so musically, with splashfuls of vivid visual imagery.  The intent (which may be unconscious) is to engage a reader’s curiosity long enough for the unifying mood the poem is expressing to sink in.  It’s interestingly complex, this mood—which includes among much else, what-I-shoulda-done regret, hostility toward the rejecting interviewer (and, it seems to me, the “whatever it was” ultimately in inimical charge of the interviewee’s life), objectivity about the comedy of it all, and melancholy at the thought of the back-rent that will not be paid).

Nothing new here—just a different personality bouncily disdaining transitions.  But concluding with a genuine keeper of a pay-off image in the poem’s last four-and-a-half lines.

I’m thinking a good name for the rather large school of Ashberians is “the Neo York School of Poets.”

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Entry 785 — the Otherstream and the Universities

Saturday, June 30th, 2012

As I said in another entry, Jake Berry has an article in The Argotist Online, edited by by Jeffrey Side, that’s about the extremely small attention academia pays to Otherstream poetry you can read here. I and these others wrote responses to it: Ivan Arguelles, Anny Ballardini, Michael Basinski, John M. Bennett, John Bradley, Norman Finkelstein, Jack Foley, Bill Freind, Bill Lavender, Alan May, Carter Monroe, Marjorie Perloff, Dale Smith, Sue Brannan Walker, Henry Weinfield.  A table of contents of the responses is here. I hope eventually to discuss these responses in an essay I’ve started but lately found too many ways to get side-tracked from.   The existence of the article and the responses to it has been fairly widely announced on the Internet.  Jeff Side says they’ve drawn a lot of visitors to The Argotist Online, ” 23,000 visitors, 18,000 of which have viewed it for more than an hour.”  What puzzles both him and me is that so far as we know, almost no one has responded to either the article or the responses to the article.  There’s also a post-article interview of Jake that no one’s said anything about that I know of.  Why?

What we’re most interested in is why no academics have defended academia from Jake’s criticism of it.  Marjorie Perloff was (I believe) the only pure academic to respond to his article, although Jeff invited others to.  And no academic I know of has so much as noted the existence of article and responses.  I find this a fascinating example of the way the universities prevent the status quo from significantly changing in the arts, as for some fifty years they’ve prevented the American status quo in poetry from significantly changing.  Here’s one possible albeit polemical and no doubt exaggerated (and not especially original) explanation for the situation:

Most academics are conformists simply incapable of significantly exploring beyond what they were taught about poetry as students, so lead an intellectual life almost guaranteed to keep them from finding out how ignorant they are of the Full contemporary poetry continuum–they read only magazines guaranteed rarely to publish any kind of poetry they’re unfamiliar with, and just about never reviewing or even mentioning other kinds of poetry.  They only read published collections of poems published by university or commercial (i.e. status quo) presses and visit websites sponsored by their magazines and by universities.  Hence, these academics come sincerely to believe that Wilshberia, the current mainstream in poetry, includes every kind of worthwhile poetry. 

When they encounter evidence that it isn’t such as The Argotist Online’s discussion of academia and the otherstream, several things may happen:

1. the brave ones, like Marjorie Perloff, may actually contest the brief against academia–albeit not very well, as I have shown in a paper I will eventually post somewhere or other;

2. others drawn in by the participation of Perloff may just skim, find flaws in the assertions and arguments of the otherstreamers, and there certainly are some, and leave, satisfied that they’ve been right all along about the otherstream;

3. a few may give some or all the discussion an honest read and investigate otherstream poetry, and join the others satisfied they’ve been right all along, but with better reason since they will have actually investigated it; the problem here is that they won’t have a sufficient amount of what I call accommodance for the ability to basically turn off the critical (academic) mechanisms of their minds to let new ways of poetry make themselves at home in their minds.  In other words, they simply won’t have the ability to deal with the new in poetry. 

4. many will stay completely away from such a discussion, realizing from what those written of in 1., 2. and 3 tell them. that it’s not for them. 

A major question remains: why don’t those described in 2. and 3. comment on their experiences, letting us know why they think they’ve been right all along.  That they do not suggests they unconsciously realize how wrong they may be and don’t want to take a chance of revealing it; or, to be fair, that they consider the otherstream too bereft of value for them to waste time critiquing.  This is stupid; pointing out what’s wrong with bad art is as valuable as pointing out what’s right with good art.  Of course, there are financial reasons to consider:  a critique of art the Establishment is uninterested in will not be anywhere near as likely to get published, or count much toward tenure or post-tenure repute if published as another treatise on Milton or Keats.  Or Ashbery, one of the few slightly innovative contemporary poets of Wilshberia.

But I think, too, that there are academics who unconsciously or even consciously fear giving any publicity at all to visual or sound or performance and any other kind of otherstream poetry because it might overcome Wilshberia and cost them students, invitations to lecture and the like–and/or just make them feel uncomfortably ignorant because incapable of assimilating it.  Even more, it would cost them stature: it would become obvious to all but their closest admirers that they did not know all there is to know about poetry.

Note: I consider this a first draft and almost certainly incomplete.  Comments are nonetheless welcome.

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Entry 774 — The Otherstream, Part One

Tuesday, June 19th, 2012

The Argotist Online has Jake Berry’s essay, Poetry Wide Open: The Otherstream (Fragments In Motion) online and a collection of responses to it including one by me at The Argotist Online.  Most of my fellow responders did a good job and are worth reading,  John M. Bennett’s was eswpecially good, its only flaw being is shortness.  More than half seemed fuzzy to me, and I disagreed fairly strongly with two or three, one of them Marjorie Perloff’s.  I’ve always considered Professor Perloff the only visible American critic who has written about poets in the otherstream, and she deserves credit for responding to Jake’s essay–great credit, for keeping aloof from discussions with or about marginals is almost a part of the definition of an academic.  She’s written very little about the otherstream, though, and only considered one small portion of it, language poetry (rather poorly, I fear).  She’s gotten the toes of one foot into the otherstream, but with her shoe still on, and seems entirely ignorant of those of us wholly immersed in it.  Unsurprisingly, I quickly wanted to attack her response.  The first thing I did was research the poets she mentioned as “experimental”–about a dozen–on the Internet.  Among them was Craig Dworkin.  I’d come across his name more than a few times but knew very little of him.  It turns out that he is, by my standards, an “experimental” artist–if we take “experimental” to be a synonym for “otherstream,” as Professor Perloff does, but I don’t, “experimental” having become, for me, a uselessly loose “polysemic” word for criticism.  Here’s what my search on Dworkin’s name got me:

Fact

By Craig Dworkin

Ink on a 5.5 by 9 inch substrate of 60-pound offset matte white paper. Composed of: varnish (soy bean oil [C57H98O6], used as a plasticizer: 52%. Phenolic modified rosin resin [Tall oil rosin: 66.2%. Nonylphenol [C15H24O]: 16.6%. Formaldehyde [CH2O]: 4.8%. Maleic anhydride [C4H2O3]: 2.6%. Glycerol [C3H8O3]: 9.6%. Traces of alkali catalyst: .2%]: 47%): 53.7%. 100S Type Alkyd used as a binder (Reaction product of linseed oil: 50.7%. Isophthalic acid [C8H6O4]: 9.5%. Trimethylolpropane [CH3CH2C(CH2OH)3]: 4.7%. Reaction product of tall oil rosin: 12.5%. Maleic anhydride [C4H2O3]: 2.5%. Pentaerythritol [C5H12O4]: 5%. Aliphatic C14 Hydrocarbon: 15%): 19.4%. Carbon Black (C: 92.8%. Petroleum: 5.1%. With sulfur, chlorine, and oxygen contaminates: 2.1%), used as a pigmenting agent: 18.6%. Tung oil (Eleostearic acid [C18H30O2]: 81.9%. Linoleic acid [C18H32O2]: 8.2%. Palmitic acid [C16H32O2]: 5.9%. Oleic acid [CH3(CH2)7CH=CH(CH2)7COOH]: 4.0%.), used as a reducer: 3.3%. Micronized polyethylene wax (C2H4)N: 2.8%. 3/50 Manganese compound, used as a through drier: 1.3%. 1/25 Cobalt linoleate compound used as a top drier: .7%. Residues of blanket wash (roughly equal parts aliphatic hydrocarbon and aromatic hydrocarbon): .2%. Adhered to: cellulose [C6H10O5] from softwood sulphite pulp (Pozone Process) of White Spruce (65%) and Jack Pine (35%): 77%; hardwood pulp (enzyme process pre-bleach Kraft pulp) of White Poplar (aspen): 15%; and batch treated PCW (8%): 69.3%. Water [H2O]: 11.0%. Clay [Kaolinite form aluminum silicate hydroxide (Al2Si2O5[OH]4): 86%. Calcium carbonate (CaCO3): 12%. Diethylenetriamine: 2%], used as a pigmenting filler: 8.4%. Hydrogen peroxide [H2O2], used as a brightening agent: 3.6%. Rosin soap, used as a sizer: 2.7%. Aluminum sulfate [Al2(SO4)]: 1.8%. Residues of cationic softener (H2O: 83.8%. Base [Stearic acid (C18H36O2): 53.8%. Palmitic acid (C16H32O2): 29%. Aminoethylethanolamine (H2-NC2-H4-NHC2-H4-OH): 17.2%]: 10.8%. Sucroseoxyacetate: 4.9%. Tallow Amine, used as a surfactant: 0.3%. Sodium chloride [NaCl], used as a viscosity controlling agent: .2%) and non-ionic emulsifying defoamer (sodium salt of dioctylsulphosuccinate [C20H37NaO7S]), combined: 1.7%. Miscellaneous foreign contaminates: 1.5%.

NOTES: “Fact” is an exact list of ingredients that make up a sheet of paper that has been written or printed on, hence the blunt title of the work. It’s a self-reflexive, deconstructed meditation on the act of writing and of publishing, with an emphasis on the materiality of language. Each time Dworkin displays the poem, he researches the medium on which it’s being viewed, changing the list of ingredients. It’s a flexible work in progress, sometimes manifesting itself as a list of the ingredients that make up a Xerox copy, other times listing the composition of an lcd display monitor. (Italicized portion my addition–BG)

Source: Poetry (July/August 2009)

This text presents an interesting challenge to my poetry-taxonomy-in-progress. It is not a poem, by my criteria. But it doesn’t seem to me to be evokature, either. That’s what I call prose that attempts to evoke images and/or emotions the way poetry does but has no lineation, or anything like lineation. What it clearly is, is a work conceptual art (which I consider inspired). For now I will consider it “conceprature,” a sibling of “evokature” (what “prose poems” are) and, like the latter, a subcategory of prose.

My pluraphrase (i.e., full expression of what a poem is, does and says) of it is inchoate right now, or less than inchoate. I’ll kick it into my under-consciousness, for now. With luck, it’ll turn into something I can work at least a tentative appreciation of “Fact” into. In the meantime, I have to acknowledge that a top-level member of the American Poetry Establishment has done a good deed for me (I mean Professor Perloff, not Craig Dowrkin, also an academic who has done a good deed for me). Not sure I can get over that.

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Entry 1203 — More Boilerplate About Academics

Wednesday, September 4th, 2013

According to Gary Soto’s bio, his poem, “Oranges,” is the most antho-logized poem in contemporary literature.  When Jim Finnegan reported this to New-Poetry, I replied, “Sounds like something an academic would say after checking six or seven mainstream anthologies.  I may be wrong, but I doubt anyone can say what poem is more antholo-gized than any other, mainly because I don’t think anyone can know about all the anthologies published.”

Jerry McGuire responded to this and that resulted a little while ago (3 P.M.) in the following:

On 9/4/2013 2:41 PM, Jerry McGuire wrote:

Bob, does it really take an academic to persuade you that a particular instance doesn’t prove a general claim? Even averaging things out, I suspect, people who write poetry for their own purposes–which are enormously varied and not in dispute–don’t strike me as “more adventurous” though I can’t for the life of me figure out what kind of “adventure” you have in mind) than academics who write poetry, some of whom are conservative, some middle-of-the-road, and some well out there beyond the fringe. If you mean, by the way, that academic writers are more likely to respect more elements of the history of poetry and include a greater historical variety among their preferences, perhaps I’d agree with you, intuitively, but I can’t prove it and I doubt you can either. As for “academics are in charge of poetry, and I include many people not employed by colleges as academics.  An academic is, by my definition, by innate temperament, an automatic defender of the status quo,” your definition strikes me as self-serving and petty. What you know about my “innate temperament” (“for instance”?) hardly qualifies you to determine what’s “automatic” in my preferences, loves, hates, and particular decisions. As so often, you seem to be nurturing some sort of long grudge, and using the list to air your brute generalizations. Some of us do read these things, you know.  And while crude prejudices don’t hurt my feelings–hardened over the years by the contempt of 18-year-olds for their elders–they sadden and disappoint me.

Jerry

On 9/4/2013 1:01 PM, Bob Grumman wrote:

I would claim that academics are much less adventurous (for good or bad) than non-academics–in general.  Compare, for instance, the anthology that I would edit if allowed to the anthology David Graham would.  Or, hey, compare the one he did edit (on conversational poetry, if my memory hasn’t completely died) with one I edited (on visual poetry).  Ignoring which was better (and believe it or not, I would certainly be willing to say they were equal but different in spite of my preference for the poems in mine), consider only which would be considered more adventurous.

Jerry, I used a particular instance to illustrate a general claim.  Maybe if I was able to find everything I’ve written on the subject, I could present a fairly persuasive case for my academic/non-academic division but I’m not, so for now will simply have to leave my opinion as just another Internet unsupporthesis.  I’ll not be able to get into what adventurous is, either, except to say that Columbus was more adventurous than Captain Shorehugger because he went where none or almost none went while the cap’n went where many had been.  The comparison holds even if the latter had found many things of value that had been overlooked by other shorehuggers (which is what the best academics are good at) and Columbus had sunk a hundred miles west of the Azores.

(Note, I can’t lose this argument because I define those you would call academics who are “well out there beyond the fringe as non-academics” since I believe that one employed by a college isn’t necessarily an academic, John M. Bennett and Mike Basinski, two Ph.D. college librarians [but neither of them with any clout at all in the poetry establishment] being cases in point.)

modestly yours, the World’s SUPREME Poventurerer

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 Jerry also wrote:

As for “academics are in charge of poetry, and I include many people not employed by colleges as academics.  An academic is, by       my definition, by innate temperament, an automatic defender of the status quo,” your definition strikes me as self-serving and petty. What you know about my “innate temperament” (“for instance”?)hardly qualifies you to determine what’s “automatic” in my preferences, loves, hates, and particular decisions. As so often, you seem to be nurturing some sort of long grudge, and using the list to air your brute generalizations. Some of us do read these things, you know. And while crude prejudices don’t hurt my feelings–hardened over the years by the contempt of 18-year-olds for their elders–they sadden and disappoint me.

Jerry

in a second post, I wrote:

I skipped the above, mistaking it for just a repeat of what I’d said in my post. I definitely have a long grudge, but when you ask what I know about your innate temperament, I’m afraid a possibly over-sensitive buzzer of yours made you take my words as personal.  If you read what I say with care, you will see that I say nothing that would indicate that I consider you an academic, by my definition.  I would say offhand that you are surely more of an academic than I.  From what I’ve read of what you’ve written, I am sure, too, that you are much less of an academic, by my definition, than the people at the top of the poetry establishment.  Just as I am, from some points of view, a terrible academic, since I believe artworks with no words of aesthetic significance cannot be poetry; that a good poem HAS to have some unifying principle (although it may be very difficult to discover and may even be chaos), that what I call otherstream poetry is just a different kind of poetry, not a better kind; that literary criticism is as valuable as poetry; and many other opinions.

Now for a little snarkiness: the belief that academic are not automatic defenders of the status quo is as crude as the belief that they are.  And my belief that the majority of those making a living in college English departments are automatic defenders of the status quo is not a prejudice but the result of quite a bit of study and thought, however misguide others may think it.  So there. True, an academic study of academics would be helpful if thorough and honest.  How about a comparison of all the poetry critics on a list of poetry critics with writings in publications almost everyone would agree are mainstream, like Poetry and The New Yorker and those on a list of those who have written a reasonably large amount of poetry criticism just about never in such publications–like I.  You could include the language poetry critics active before 1990, when language poetry became what I called “acadominant,” meaning widely accepted by academics as important, even by the many against–who showed they thought it important by campaigning against it.  It proved me right by being confirmed as the right edge of Wilshberia around 1900 with the acceptance of a language poet into the American academy of poets, and mainstream anthologies of language poetry. Something of the sort will eventually be done, but not for several decades, I suspect.

–Bob

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Entry 1190 — My List

Thursday, August 22nd, 2013

I somewhat angrily believe that every poet on my little list of yesterday (and  many others–how did I manage to leave Ed Baker off it, I just thought) merits a book-length critical study.  And will get more than one fifty years from now from the kind of academics now writing about Lowell and Ginsberg.  Anyway, the one on John Martone will be especially interesting as a study of a representative bridge between the knownstream of our time and its otherstream–via haiku.  LeRoy Gorman is another such–and possibly I, with a bunch of conventional haiku in print and an early collection of visual haiku.

I’m basically taking another day off due to being nine-tenths non-sentient again.  So that’s it for this entry . . . except another coinage: recogrization.  When a person taught that Hartford is the capital of Connecticut is asked what the capital of Connecticut is and says, “Hartford,” he has shown he has successfully memorized the datum; if he cannot answer but picks “Hartford” out of a list of four cities as the answer, he has shown he has successfully recogrized the datum.  I’m good at recogrization but not at memorization (although I was a whiz at it before learning how stupid it was).

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Entry 1189 — 10 Important American Othersteam Poets

Wednesday, August 21st, 2013

Ten Important American Othersteam Poets

John E. Bennett

Karl Kempton

Guy Beining

K.S. Ernst

Marilyn Rosenberg

Carol Stetser

John Martone

Scott Helmes

Karl Young

Michael Basinski

My list’s title demonstrates one reason I’m so little-known a commentator on poetry: it doesn’t scream that it’s of the ten best American Otherstream Poets, just a list of a few important ones.  What makes them “otherstream?”  The fact that you’ll almost certainly not find them on any other list of poets on the Internet.

This entry is a bit of a reply to Set Abramson–not because I want to add these names to his list but because two of the names on it have been doing what he calls metamodern poetry for twenty years or more, as far as I can tell from my hazy understanding of his hazy definition by example of metamodern poetry.  Both are extraordinary performance poets mixing all kinds of other stuff besides a single language’s words into their works.  I would suggest to Seth that he do a serious study of them, or maybe just Bennett, whose work is more widely available on the Internet, and who frequently uses Spanish along with English in it.  It would be most instructive to find out how metamodern Seth takes Bennett to be, and what he thinks of him.  Warning: Bennett’s range is so great that it’s quite possible one might encounter five or ten collections of his work that happen to be more or less in the same school, and less unconventional than it is elsewhere, so one might dismiss him as not all that innovatively different.

Which prompts me to e.mail John to suggest that he work up a collection that reveals something of his range by including one poem representative of each of the major kinds of poetry he composes.  So, off am I to do just that

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Entry 1183 — Seth Abramson’s Latest List

Thursday, August 15th, 2013

Seth Abramson has posted a new list at the Huffington Review.  Basically it’s a list of those poetry people he wants to like him–al the main members of the American Poetry Establishment, and a sprinkling of other knownstreamers hoping t get into the Establishment one day.  He calls it “The Top 200 Advocates for American Poetry.”  Needless to say, no one who main poetry interest is visual poetry is on it.  I was hoping Dan Schneider would be on it, but he wasn’t.  It seems of close to no value to me, even from the point of view of knownstreamers.  Everybody in the field knows who the bignames Abramson names are, and the no-names will make little impression among so many other names.

I posted a negative comment to Abramson’s blog that never appeared–because he’s a jerk as well as incompetent, or just due to some Internet glitch, possibly due to me?  Can’t say.

I didn’t try to post another comment at Abramson’s blog but said a few things about it at New-Poetry, where it got the usual small flurry of attention Abramson’s lists always get there.  After wondering what happened to my comment, I said, “Anyway, here’s my final opinion of (the list): a long, boring cheer for the status quo in American poetry that ignores the full range of contemporary poetry.”

As I later wrote at New-Poetry, if I were making a list like Abramson’s, I’d call it a list of people doing . . . a lot for contemporary American Poetry and limit it to ten names or so.  Three on it would be Karl Young, Anny Ballardini and James Finnegan (who runs New-Poetry).  I later remembered Geof Huth, who should certainly be on it.  I thought maybe one or two that are on the other list deserved to be on it, but certainly not most of  them–although probably just about all of them are doing good things for  their small section of mainstream poetry.

Tad Richards (who actually said at New-Poetry that I should be on the list!) wondered if “representing a small section (was) really a reason to be left off the list.”  I replied, “Not a list of 200+ names, no.  I was speaking of my own list of TEN people doing good work for contemporary American Poetry.  Of course, we’re in an Internet discussion, so consisting of comments not necessarily thoroughly thought out, at least from me.  I can see the value of promoting just one kind of poetry–IF few others are bothering with it.  And, sure, even if someone is writing about Ashbery and able to say something new about him, that’s a contribution.  BUT, I say, not enough by itself to put that person on my list.

“While speaking of my list, I would add that it would only be of publishers, editors and critics.  They are the ones in positions to really do something for poetry.  Of course, many of them can also be poets.  And teachers–but only if they also are publishers, editors or critics.  What we desperately need, I believe, are visible  writers directing people not to poets but to schools of poetry they might enjoy, and not just pointing, but saying what the members of the schools are doing and how to appreciate it.  Who on Seth’s list is doing that–for more than one or two schools?

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Entry 905 — My Thought for Today

Sunday, October 28th, 2012

Having become more involved in the discussion at Spidertangle of the new vispo anthology than I intended, lots of thoughts about anthologies, criticism, poetry-evaluation, the field, poets, etc., have been bouncing around between my ears.  One thought I had that gave me a great deal of pleasure, in good part because of how much others in the field will disagree with it, is that I believe that if I were the very first person to advance a judgement of an artwork, and supported my opinion with competent reasoning, then my judgement should be considered the Sole Judgement of the work until such a time as someone else offered a second opinion, with the support of competent reasoning–even if before then twenty others said I was wrong but failed to support their views with competent reasoning.  In such a case, I would consider my judegement significantly more likely to be right than it had been because twenty people had attacked without presenting anything against it.

Of course, nothing like the above ever happens in real life because competent reasoning is disdained, especially by poets.  I take that back.  Certainly nothing like that happens in the short run.  The main judgement of almost any artwork depends on how many “like” buttons have been push on its behalf.  But in the long run, it may be that the ten or fifteen pieces of intelligent discussion about an artwork, or art oeuvre, or art school become recognized as such and absorbed by enough intelligent people to counteract all the unsubstantiated short-term judgements of it (or, in no small number of cases, agree with it).

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Entry 834 — More of My Boilerplate at New-Poetry

Saturday, August 18th, 2012

On 8/15/2012 7:42 AM, bob grumman wrote:

Perhaps it’s wrong of me to be bothered by a mainstream critic’s being ignorant of or indifferent to the only significant thing I believe has happened in American poetry over the past century, the discovery and increasingly interesting use of (relatively) new techniques, but I am.

Sent: Wednesday, August 15, 2012 2:31 PM
Subject: Re: [New-Poetry] Hass’ What Light Can Do: Essays on Art,Imagination and the Natural World
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Of course it’s not “wrong,” Bob–by all means, be bothered.
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I still don’t have time for you, Jerry, but I’m going to reply, anyway! (Feel honored.)
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Me, I’m inclined to write my own manifesto, “On Indifference” (let’s make it a book-length piece, On Indifference and Other Life-Affirming Virtues),

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An individual can’t avoid indifference about some things (like my indifference to the squabbles of the republicrats), but no field’s establishment (and every field has one) should be indifferent about something like visual poetry that a sizable number of people in its field think is important. It took me a long time to accept language poetry (genuine language poetry such as Clark Coolidge’s) as anything but nonsense (although not as long as it took me earlier to accept free verse—although I instantly accepted Cummings’s visual poetry very early when shown what it was doing), but I finally did, because so many people to me were enthusiastic about it. Not that I can accept every poet’s work that others find terrific, but I try to. I’m still working on Gertrude Stein’s.
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taking the position that there are always people eager to pursue possibilities at the margins (or borders, or frontiers–whatever suits one’s fantasies) of any ensemble of creative forms, while others make the best of their own engagement with the history of that ensemble (including its hidden history, perhaps),

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Some even do both! At the same time! You’d never know it from reading any of the books of criticism Finnegan tells us about.
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and that there’s nothing wrong with either exploration of one’s energies. It would be important to note, in such a screed, that there are huge loads of crap deposited both at the margins and in the center.

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Definitely.
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(If I did the book-length version, I’d certainly want to include a chapter [titled “One’s Ceiling is Another’s Floor”?] about how spatial descriptions of “ensembles” is a stupid way to go about describing the antics of artists. My bad.)

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Not sure what you mean by “ensembles.”
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And there, the manifesto’s done, and I, too, lack a contract to publish it.

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I suspect you’d have any easier time getting one (from a “real” publisher) than I would for any book of mine. I was just reading about Brad Thor, a thriller writer, who was sitting next to a woman on a plane with whom he got talking literature. Toward the end of the flight, he mentioned he was thinking about writing a novel. She told him she was a salesrepresentative of Simon and Schuster, and she’d like to read his manuscript when he was done with it. He did send it to her and it got published by Simon & Schuster, and now he’s making big bucks. I can just see you or me having a conversation with the sales rep. . . .
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Oh, and the book I spoke of hoping to write on the last hundred years or so of American poetry would not be a manifesto. The changes I want are very limited: only that the Poetry Establishment notice my kind of poetry—even if they trash it. And that a poet should do his best to master every kind of poetry he can during a lengthy apprenticeship; then focus on his favorite kind, but keep in touch with as many of the other kinds as he can. Too many “advanced” poets are as foolishly indifferent to traditional poetry, particularly formal verse, as traditional poets are to visual poetry and the like.
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I thought I had a third demand of the poetry world, but can’t think of it now.
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As to “the only significant thing” (and thank goodness for that “I believe,” Bob, which feels refreshingly humane and sensible), you’ve made it fairly broad, haven’t you, by describing it as “the discovery and increasingly interesting use of (relatively) new techniques”? So whatever else you could say about really good writing (of course, my “good” is up for grabs, as much as your “interesting”) that is (ostensibly) indifferent to marginal experimentation, you couldn’t claim it was “significant” in any, uh, significant way? Well, that’s a mouthful, whether you digest it or spit it out.

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You have me there, Jerry. But it’s as much a problem with the language as with me. I was bringing up my standard belief in the difference I find between “effective” poems and “important” poems. I need different words. My point is simply that even great poems as the one by Hass you mention may be do not significantly enlarge the field of poetry because they add nothing significantly new to it. They will add a new outlook and style, since every poet has a unique outlook and style, and perhaps new subject matter. But new subject just doesn’t seem significant to me. One painter is the first to depict some new species of butterfly, so what? Or a novelist is first to tell us what the life of an Australian aborigine juggler is like. Ditto.
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I think the best examples of what I mean are in classical music: I think a case could be made for the view that Brahms’s symphonies equal in effectiveness to Beethoven’s, but Beethoven’s were far more important than Brahms’s. I prefer Richard Straus’s Der Rosenkavalier to any of Wagner’s operas (I think) but Wagner’s operas are unquestionably more important in the way I’m speaking of than Straus’s. Wagner and Beethoven advance their art, Brahms and Straus did not, they “merely” contributed brilliantly to it.
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I’ll let you know when I have the right two words or phrases needed to distinguish the two kinds of artists.
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And by the way, just as Philip Levine might be best positioned in relation to his little fantasy about Lorca meeting Hart Crane in New York, Hass is most ilmpressive for me when I think of his work as positioned relative to his beautiful poem about Mandelstam and Vallejo, “Rusia en 1931.” (I can’t find it online–it’s in _Human Wishes_ [and, since I don’t own Human Wishes, somewhere else as well–sorry that I can’t track it down right now.]) It’s full of kinds of emotion most writers are too careful to allow into their poems (someone would make a snotty crack about it in any graduate workshop), making it emerge from a subtle drift among prose statement, deep image, and a kind of journalistic impulse. It positions itself between ardent political aspirations (Vallejo) and the brutal annihilation of a unique imagination by a related political ardency (Mandelstam). And it doesn’t reduce itself to any answer of convenience: it hangs you there, caught among its ideas and forms and characterizations. It’s not the idea, exactly, that makes it so fine, and certainly not its exploration of tonal qualities caught up in manipulations of formal dynamics: it’s the overall effect (and the decision) of that hanging. Here’s the key, for me: it’s not just wistful (Hass, like a great many 20th-century poets of much less skill, can be accused of slipping more wist into his poems than is quite decorous); it’s more a sign of desperation and outrage, hung out to bleed. So when I think of Levine, Crane, and Lorca, I think: it’s great that he wrote that poem about his betters. And when I think of Hass, Vallejo, and Mandelstam, I think: they constitute a very interesting set, made available by Hass’s insight and skill.
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l suspect he made use of haiku, too. But however effective you do a good job of showing he was, he wasn’t “significant” in my special sense.

best, Bob

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Entry 833 — Plot Versus Character

Friday, August 17th, 2012

Yesterday I finished reading Tom Clancy’s The Hunt for Red October.  It’s a mere “genre” novel, but I doubt any of the “art” novels of our time are better.  I think critics have too long been under the influence of Henry James, whose forte was characterization, not plot, as Clancy’s is.  I much prefer The Hunt for Red October to the one James novel I know I read, The Ambassadors–a penetrating psychological study of an absolute nincompoop as far as I’m concerned.  The inability to be explicit does not seem the brilliant virtue to me it does to Jamesians.

I think taste in these matters boils down to which of a person’s awarenesses is stronger, his sagaceptual awareness or his anthroceptual awareness.  I’ve discussed all this before, but haven’t anything else to post today, so here it is again.  (I also want to make public my notion of sagaceptuality as much as possible so maybe I’ll get some credit for it when some certified theoretical psychologist discovers it.)  It’s the awareness which tends to organize thinking in goal directed modes–i.e., to put a person on a quest.  It could be a child hunting for pirate treasure on a beach, a girl pursuing a boy, me working up a decent definition of . . . “sagaceptuality.”  It could also be a vicarious quest, as was the one I went on with the hero of The Hunt for Red October.  With several of the heroes of that book, actually.

What happens is that we all have an instinctive recognition of certain goals–for instance, the capture of a mate.  We usually have some instinctive goal pursuit drive that the object we recognize as a proper goal makes available to us.  What it does, basically, is lock us onto the object it is our goal to capture (or escape from) and energize us when we are effectively closing in on it (or escaping it), and de-energize us to take us out of single-minded ineffective pursuit and expose us to other possible better kinds, until one of them is judged to improve out pursuit.  In other words, just a homing device, with many different possible targets, like a possible mate, or food, or beauty, or fame.  Nothing much to it.

Anthroceptuality is simply interest in oneself and others.  When it is dominant, other instincts rule us, such as the need for social approval.  Needless to say, both anthroceptuality and sagaceptuality will usually be in some kind of partnership–with other awarenesses.  But some, as I’ve said, will be stronger in sagaceptuality than anthroceptuality, and some the reverse.  The former will prefer plot in the stories he reads or movies he watches to characterization; the latter will consider plot trivial compared to characterization.  I’m convinced that normal men are sagaceptuals, normal women anthroceptuals.  But not necessarily all the time.

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Entry 811 — Monet & Minor News and Thoughts

Thursday, July 26th, 2012

Below is Monet’s Regatta at Argenteuil.  It’s from a calendar I’ve had hanging in my computer room for several years because I like it so much.  I now have a second interest in it: using it in one of my long division poems.  I want to do that because of an event the local visual arts center I belong to (which has a building where it has classes and puts on exhibitions, one of them a yearly national one, albeit none of them are what anyone would call close to the cutting edge) is sponsoring.  Many of its painters are painting copies of Monet works, and poets have been invited to submit poems about Monet works to be show with the paintings.  There is probably a reading, too.  I thought it would be amusing to submit one of my poems, and I’d love to be able to use Regatta at Argenteuil.  I have another couple of months I’ve just found out.  I thought I needed to get it done by August.  Which is why I scanned my copy of the painting a while ago, making it available for this entry, one more that I had nothing much else for.

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I can’t think of anything to go with the painting.  I haven’t had very few ideas for the past three or four months, and none I was interested in to do more than jot down somewhere.  Last years bout this time I found out about a contest the magazine Rattle has every year.  One can submit up to 4 poems to it, and I knew it had published some visual poems at one time, so was inspired to make a set of four long division poems for the contest, four that I still think are among my best.  They never arrived because I didn’t put enough stamps on the envelope I sent them in, unaware of the latest cost of sending.  I wish I could try again–this deadline is 1 August–but no ideas.  And the poems have to be unpublished.  I should be saving poems for contests, especially for one like this that I know will occur yearly, but I tend either to post them here, or send them to the latest editors who have invited work from me.  Another problem for me is that I’m often unsure whether or not a particular poem of mine has appeared anywhere.  The main problem, of course, is that I’m so unprolific.  I could do a bunch of Poem poems at just about any time, I think, but I don’t consider them good for contests because so dependent on my main character, whom I believe hard to take to until exposed to a number of times.  If even then.

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Since this is another of my extremely lackadaisical entries, here’s a post by Stephen Russell and my responses to it at New-Poetry:
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My list would be a lot different, but yours at least is half unconventional. Also, I’d stay away from your title. I’d go with “My Favorite Poems of the Past 25 Years In English That I’m Familiar With.”
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“By Others.” I feel sorry for any poet who doesn’t include many of his own poems among his favorites, however much he should realize how subjective his choice is.
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Getting the dates right would be hard. I’d rather go with my favorite all-time poems.  Incredibly hard, though—like which of Stevens’s poems do I like best? I think to simplify, I’d limit myself to one poem per poet. Otherwise, 39 Stevenses and 38 Frosts. No Merwins or Ashberys, that’s for sure.
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From: stephen russell
Sent: Thursday, July 26, 2012 3:35 PM
To: NewPoetry List
Subject: Re: [New-Poetry] What Are the Best Poems of the Past 25 Years?
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The Folding Cliffs, W.S. Merwin
(Epic poem about Hawaii.)
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Deed, Rod Smith
(The title acts as an extended methaphor (or is that metaphor?)… for nation building).
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Eunoia, Christian Bok.
The work that introduced univolics. At least I was introduced to the concept thanks to Bok.
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(Neither his work (Bok’s), or Kenneth Goldsmith’s should be considered Da Da. Da Da was composed of quick improvs and manifestos (in large part). Not so, the work of aforementioned poets. )
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I disagree with this: what counts is the finished poem, not how it was done.
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When was Self Portrait in the Convex Mirror published? The title poem was shockingly non non-referential.
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The Age of Huts by Ron Silliman should be considered simply for its ambition, the size of the thing.
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Size may not be even the most important indicator of ambition.
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I don’t consider myself well enough versed in other stream poets to mention an actual title as of yet.
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Are we embarrassing yet?
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–Bob
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 (The last bit is a reference to someone’s calling a thread Stephen and I were on an embarrassment.)
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 Slightly later, I made a second response: “Another bit of my boilerplate is that I’d want to make a list of what poems of the ones I’m familiar with I consider the most important, many of which may not be on my list of “best poems.” One or two might not even be poems.”
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Entry 785 — the Otherstream and the Universities

Saturday, June 30th, 2012

As I said in another entry, Jake Berry has an article in The Argotist Online, edited by by Jeffrey Side, that’s about the extremely small attention academia pays to Otherstream poetry you can read here. I and these others wrote responses to it: Ivan Arguelles, Anny Ballardini, Michael Basinski, John M. Bennett, John Bradley, Norman Finkelstein, Jack Foley, Bill Freind, Bill Lavender, Alan May, Carter Monroe, Marjorie Perloff, Dale Smith, Sue Brannan Walker, Henry Weinfield.  A table of contents of the responses is here. I hope eventually to discuss these responses in an essay I’ve started but lately found too many ways to get side-tracked from.   The existence of the article and the responses to it has been fairly widely announced on the Internet.  Jeff Side says they’ve drawn a lot of visitors to The Argotist Online, ” 23,000 visitors, 18,000 of which have viewed it for more than an hour.”  What puzzles both him and me is that so far as we know, almost no one has responded to either the article or the responses to the article.  There’s also a post-article interview of Jake that no one’s said anything about that I know of.  Why?

What we’re most interested in is why no academics have defended academia from Jake’s criticism of it.  Marjorie Perloff was (I believe) the only pure academic to respond to his article, although Jeff invited others to.  And no academic I know of has so much as noted the existence of article and responses.  I find this a fascinating example of the way the universities prevent the status quo from significantly changing in the arts, as for some fifty years they’ve prevented the American status quo in poetry from significantly changing.  Here’s one possible albeit polemical and no doubt exaggerated (and not especially original) explanation for the situation:

Most academics are conformists simply incapable of significantly exploring beyond what they were taught about poetry as students, so lead an intellectual life almost guaranteed to keep them from finding out how ignorant they are of the Full contemporary poetry continuum–they read only magazines guaranteed rarely to publish any kind of poetry they’re unfamiliar with, and just about never reviewing or even mentioning other kinds of poetry.  They only read published collections of poems published by university or commercial (i.e. status quo) presses and visit websites sponsored by their magazines and by universities.  Hence, these academics come sincerely to believe that Wilshberia, the current mainstream in poetry, includes every kind of worthwhile poetry. 

When they encounter evidence that it isn’t such as The Argotist Online’s discussion of academia and the otherstream, several things may happen:

1. the brave ones, like Marjorie Perloff, may actually contest the brief against academia–albeit not very well, as I have shown in a paper I will eventually post somewhere or other;

2. others drawn in by the participation of Perloff may just skim, find flaws in the assertions and arguments of the otherstreamers, and there certainly are some, and leave, satisfied that they’ve been right all along about the otherstream;

3. a few may give some or all the discussion an honest read and investigate otherstream poetry, and join the others satisfied they’ve been right all along, but with better reason since they will have actually investigated it; the problem here is that they won’t have a sufficient amount of what I call accommodance for the ability to basically turn off the critical (academic) mechanisms of their minds to let new ways of poetry make themselves at home in their minds.  In other words, they simply won’t have the ability to deal with the new in poetry. 

4. many will stay completely away from such a discussion, realizing from what those written of in 1., 2. and 3 tell them. that it’s not for them. 

A major question remains: why don’t those described in 2. and 3. comment on their experiences, letting us know why they think they’ve been right all along.  That they do not suggests they unconsciously realize how wrong they may be and don’t want to take a chance of revealing it; or, to be fair, that they consider the otherstream too bereft of value for them to waste time critiquing.  This is stupid; pointing out what’s wrong with bad art is as valuable as pointing out what’s right with good art.  Of course, there are financial reasons to consider:  a critique of art the Establishment is uninterested in will not be anywhere near as likely to get published, or count much toward tenure or post-tenure repute if published as another treatise on Milton or Keats.  Or Ashbery, one of the few slightly innovative contemporary poets of Wilshberia.

But I think, too, that there are academics who unconsciously or even consciously fear giving any publicity at all to visual or sound or performance and any other kind of otherstream poetry because it might overcome Wilshberia and cost them students, invitations to lecture and the like–and/or just make them feel uncomfortably ignorant because incapable of assimilating it.  Even more, it would cost them stature: it would become obvious to all but their closest admirers that they did not know all there is to know about poetry.

Note: I consider this a first draft and almost certainly incomplete.  Comments are nonetheless welcome.

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Entry 730 — Establishment Poetry Anthologies

Sunday, May 6th, 2012

When mediocrities protest an anthology of poems, they invariably complain about some fellow mediocrity’s being left out.  When I protest an anthology of poetry, I complain about entire schools of poetry being left out.  A less common complaint of academic mediocrities about anthologies is that their publishers were too cheap to pay to republish some canonized work already published elsewhere ten or twenty times, like “The Wasteland.”  I say no anthology that has to pay for permission to publish any poem in it is worth reading, because the only poems we need an anthology for are by poets whose superiority to what’s in anthologies like Dove’s makes them ineligible to qualify for payment for their work.

Wouldn’t it be nice for mediocrities, though, if we had a hundred anthologies and they ALL had “The Wasteland” in it—assuming, of course, that they had no equivalent from our time of that poem, but that goes without saying.

If the poetry establishment had a choice between an anthology with nothing but the best Amercian poems composed before 1950 and an anthology with no poems published before 1950 or any innovative poems published after 1950, which would it choose?  Generally, establishment anthologies try to combine the two.

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Entry 484 — Another Exchange with an Academic « POETICKS

Entry 484 — Another Exchange with an Academic

From New-Poetry yesterday and this morning (slightly revised for clarity):

B.G.: Here’s an easy question, David.  Do you think a book by an established critic like Vendler or Logan about 5 poets representing schools of poetry no established critic has every written seriously about, would be more worth writing than one about Levine?  

D.G.: Yes, that’s an easy question.  The answer is: it depends on what they write.

B.G.: Obviously, I meant if some critic like Vendler wrote a book of criticism at the level of the critic’s other works, which would you rather the critic write about–Five poets as written-about as Levine, or five poets representing schools no well-known critic has seriously written about.

D.G.: I don’t have opinions about work I haven’t read, and I don’t assume anything is automatically “better” based on the criteria that you

B.G.: Whenever anyone poses a question like mine, “better” means “according to the person asked.”  Why can’t you meet these simple questions head-on?

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D.G.:  This’ll be the last from me on this go-round, Bob.  

I did meet your question head-on.  I said that I don’t have an opinion on something I haven’t read.  So I don’t know which book would be “better,” even according to me.  I’d have to read it first.  Is that hard to fathom?

B.G.: To me, it is, David.  To me, what I’m asking, to rephrase to meet your weirdly insistent need to avoid answering my question, is which of the two works I mention do you believe you would turn out preferring having read if you were to read both.  The question underlying this is do you believe a book by a prominent critic about poetry doing things no prominent critic has written about would be more valuable than a book by the same critic, at the same level of effectiveness, about poetry doing things many prominent critics have discussed.

Your contention that you don’t have opinions about books that you haven’t read, by the way, seems unlikely.  How is it, for example, that you haven’t bought and read a book of my criticism but have bought and read many books by certified critics and read them if you started off having no opinion about any of those books?  Do you have to read every book you read through to the end to develop an opinion of it, on the grounds that you can’t have an opinion of any part you don’t read, and that you need to in order to have an opinion of the book as a whole?  Do you read every email sent you including spam all the way through?  You must if you read any of them since you can’t have an opinion of them without doing so.

I tend to think your outlook is based on a fear of expressing an opinion that most people will consider wrong.  I don’t have that fear, so am quite able to form and express opinions without full knowledge of every fact having to do with the subject my opinion is about.  I’m confident that if I’m wrong, I’ll be able to change my mind.  I’m also confident that this way I’ll be able to say many more interesting things than a person who fears looking bad.

D.G.: Nor do I think, as you evidently do, that it’s automatically “better” to pay attention to a given poet just because that style hasn’t been paid as much attention as, well, as the styles of poetry that most people actually enjoy reading.  

But how will you know that you won’t prefer the undiscussed style to the received style if all the commentators you’re willing to read won’t discuss it?  Isn’t that really having an opinion of something you haven’t read, the opinion being that it’s not at all a bad thing that only your sort of poetry be discussed by prominent critics?

D.G.: Plenty of great music to be written in C major, and all that.  There could be a great book on Levine being written right now, for all I know. 

B.G.: There’s nothing wrong with having an opinion before reading it that a book that has a 1% chance of saying something interesting about a much-discussed poet will be better than one that covers an unfamiliar kind of poetry, but why can’t you openly admit that you do?  I have no trouble stating that I think another book on Levine by some prominent critic will have no chance at all of being as valuable as a book by the same critic about the kind of poets you consider the equivalent of cowboys kicking moose skulls and calling it baseball (or something close to that).

 

2 Responses to “Entry 484 — Another Exchange with an Academic”

  1. Ed Baker says:

    as I see “it” (said the Blind Man):
    (the problem with the critic is that) their application offers little more (and even less than) a salutary reminder that pattern-spotting and pattern-making, as process, that too often lacks in any clear distinction from one another in their
    ‘piss-ant’ minds …. with the result that (as Dryden said of translation: ‘ many a fair precept ….is, like a seeming demonstration in the mathematics, very specious in the diagram, but failing in the mechanic operation.’

    In other words the critic/academic hasn’t got a clue as to what the Holy Grail is
    or what a poetic metaphor is or from whence one comes !

  2. Plato got it wrong: ban the poetry critic (academic) from the republic, not the poet

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Entry 447 — Me Versus Academia, Again « POETICKS

Entry 447 — Me Versus Academia, Again

David Graham made one of his always reasonable, never alarming posts to a thread on a 1993 book of Heather McHugh’s about the use of fragments in poetry, Broken English.  He couldn’t keep from making what I took to be a crack at me, and was unable not to reply to.

.  .  . I think McHugh’s right–if I understand her point, what she’s talking about is not a particular technique but an effect reachable by various means at various times, one of those first principles that I referred to before.  The high modernists, who were crazy about collage, were in this light not inventing anything entirely new so much as finding a fresh path to an age-old destination.

(All worthy destinations are age-old?)

This principle of disjunction, then, is visible in Whitman’s whip-saw juxtapositions, Stein’s fracturing of syntax, Eliot’s fragments shored against the ruins, the electric leap in a haiku, surrealist imagery, and so forth, right up through more recent instances such as Ginsberg’s “hydrogen jukebox” and Ashbery’s ruminative ramblings.

I’m just thinking aloud here, and no doubt overgeneralizing, but it occurs to me that there is at least a kinship between poetry such as Dean Young’s and a lot of language-centered poetry with which it wouldn’t normally be compared.  Rather like Ashbery, Young employs utterly conventional syntax, image, and figure; but the results are most slippery and unparaphraseable.  He doesn’t fracture language itself, but there is plenty of disjunction and fragmentation at the conceptual level.

If you focus mostly on the easy binaries (style/theme; free verse/meter; traditional/experimental) you would naturally miss recognizing this sort of kinship.  If, for example, all your definitions of poetry focused relentlessly on
purely technical matters such as the handling of syntax.

My response: “I suppose if you focused all your consideration of poetry on the techniques objectively distinguishing each kind from all others, you’d possibly miss as much as ten percent of the things you’d miss if you focused it only on the trivial kinships that can be found between any two kinds of poems.  (Note: there is more to appreciating poetry than defining it, although that’s the most important part of intelligently appreciating it.)”

In a second post, I opined that “all worthy destinations are much more age-old than new, but never not-new in some significant way.”

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Entry 357 — The Smugness of Wilshberians « POETICKS

Entry 357 — The Smugness of Wilshberians

To keep posting a daily entry, here’s a post I wrote a month-and-a-half ago in response to David Graham, who near-perfectly personifies the Wilshberian:

Let’s run a bit with the sports analogy. Wilshberia as Bob tends to define it would not just include the major & minor leagues of pro baseball, but every single college, high school, middle school, and community league. Plus sandlot games, softball at company picnics & family reunions.  Fathers playing catch with kids in the back yard, too, of course.  Oh, and naturally all games overseas, not to mention computer baseball games & fantasy leagues.

What wouldn’t the label encompass?

Well, such things as two guys in Havre, Montana who like to kick a deer skull back & forth and call it “baseball.”  Sure, there’s no bat, ball, gloves, diamond, fans, pitcher, or catcher– but they do call it baseball, and wonder why the mainstream media consistently fails to mention their game.

Our minds seem to be running in parallel, David.  I was just thinking that the reason no academics have or can come up with a (better) term for Wilshberia (which they consider derogatory although I consider it descriptive) is that they think it the whole of poetry, so not needing a name.  In other words, for them the range of poetry from Wilbur’s to Ashbery’s is the complete range of poetry.  And people like me, who compose things we think are poems but which are considerably different from anything Wilshberian poets are composing should not mind being considered no more poets than “two guys in Havre, Montana who like to kick a deer skull back & forth” are baseball players.

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Entry 1203 — More Boilerplate About Academics « POETICKS

Entry 1203 — More Boilerplate About Academics

According to Gary Soto’s bio, his poem, “Oranges,” is the most antho-logized poem in contemporary literature.  When Jim Finnegan reported this to New-Poetry, I replied, “Sounds like something an academic would say after checking six or seven mainstream anthologies.  I may be wrong, but I doubt anyone can say what poem is more antholo-gized than any other, mainly because I don’t think anyone can know about all the anthologies published.”

Jerry McGuire responded to this and that resulted a little while ago (3 P.M.) in the following:

On 9/4/2013 2:41 PM, Jerry McGuire wrote:

Bob, does it really take an academic to persuade you that a particular instance doesn’t prove a general claim? Even averaging things out, I suspect, people who write poetry for their own purposes–which are enormously varied and not in dispute–don’t strike me as “more adventurous” though I can’t for the life of me figure out what kind of “adventure” you have in mind) than academics who write poetry, some of whom are conservative, some middle-of-the-road, and some well out there beyond the fringe. If you mean, by the way, that academic writers are more likely to respect more elements of the history of poetry and include a greater historical variety among their preferences, perhaps I’d agree with you, intuitively, but I can’t prove it and I doubt you can either. As for “academics are in charge of poetry, and I include many people not employed by colleges as academics.  An academic is, by my definition, by innate temperament, an automatic defender of the status quo,” your definition strikes me as self-serving and petty. What you know about my “innate temperament” (“for instance”?) hardly qualifies you to determine what’s “automatic” in my preferences, loves, hates, and particular decisions. As so often, you seem to be nurturing some sort of long grudge, and using the list to air your brute generalizations. Some of us do read these things, you know.  And while crude prejudices don’t hurt my feelings–hardened over the years by the contempt of 18-year-olds for their elders–they sadden and disappoint me.

Jerry

On 9/4/2013 1:01 PM, Bob Grumman wrote:

I would claim that academics are much less adventurous (for good or bad) than non-academics–in general.  Compare, for instance, the anthology that I would edit if allowed to the anthology David Graham would.  Or, hey, compare the one he did edit (on conversational poetry, if my memory hasn’t completely died) with one I edited (on visual poetry).  Ignoring which was better (and believe it or not, I would certainly be willing to say they were equal but different in spite of my preference for the poems in mine), consider only which would be considered more adventurous.

Jerry, I used a particular instance to illustrate a general claim.  Maybe if I was able to find everything I’ve written on the subject, I could present a fairly persuasive case for my academic/non-academic division but I’m not, so for now will simply have to leave my opinion as just another Internet unsupporthesis.  I’ll not be able to get into what adventurous is, either, except to say that Columbus was more adventurous than Captain Shorehugger because he went where none or almost none went while the cap’n went where many had been.  The comparison holds even if the latter had found many things of value that had been overlooked by other shorehuggers (which is what the best academics are good at) and Columbus had sunk a hundred miles west of the Azores.

(Note, I can’t lose this argument because I define those you would call academics who are “well out there beyond the fringe as non-academics” since I believe that one employed by a college isn’t necessarily an academic, John M. Bennett and Mike Basinski, two Ph.D. college librarians [but neither of them with any clout at all in the poetry establishment] being cases in point.)

modestly yours, the World’s SUPREME Poventurerer

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 Jerry also wrote:

As for “academics are in charge of poetry, and I include many people not employed by colleges as academics.  An academic is, by       my definition, by innate temperament, an automatic defender of the status quo,” your definition strikes me as self-serving and petty. What you know about my “innate temperament” (“for instance”?)hardly qualifies you to determine what’s “automatic” in my preferences, loves, hates, and particular decisions. As so often, you seem to be nurturing some sort of long grudge, and using the list to air your brute generalizations. Some of us do read these things, you know. And while crude prejudices don’t hurt my feelings–hardened over the years by the contempt of 18-year-olds for their elders–they sadden and disappoint me.

Jerry

in a second post, I wrote:

I skipped the above, mistaking it for just a repeat of what I’d said in my post. I definitely have a long grudge, but when you ask what I know about your innate temperament, I’m afraid a possibly over-sensitive buzzer of yours made you take my words as personal.  If you read what I say with care, you will see that I say nothing that would indicate that I consider you an academic, by my definition.  I would say offhand that you are surely more of an academic than I.  From what I’ve read of what you’ve written, I am sure, too, that you are much less of an academic, by my definition, than the people at the top of the poetry establishment.  Just as I am, from some points of view, a terrible academic, since I believe artworks with no words of aesthetic significance cannot be poetry; that a good poem HAS to have some unifying principle (although it may be very difficult to discover and may even be chaos), that what I call otherstream poetry is just a different kind of poetry, not a better kind; that literary criticism is as valuable as poetry; and many other opinions.

Now for a little snarkiness: the belief that academic are not automatic defenders of the status quo is as crude as the belief that they are.  And my belief that the majority of those making a living in college English departments are automatic defenders of the status quo is not a prejudice but the result of quite a bit of study and thought, however misguide others may think it.  So there. True, an academic study of academics would be helpful if thorough and honest.  How about a comparison of all the poetry critics on a list of poetry critics with writings in publications almost everyone would agree are mainstream, like Poetry and The New Yorker and those on a list of those who have written a reasonably large amount of poetry criticism just about never in such publications–like I.  You could include the language poetry critics active before 1990, when language poetry became what I called “acadominant,” meaning widely accepted by academics as important, even by the many against–who showed they thought it important by campaigning against it.  It proved me right by being confirmed as the right edge of Wilshberia around 1900 with the acceptance of a language poet into the American academy of poets, and mainstream anthologies of language poetry. Something of the sort will eventually be done, but not for several decades, I suspect.

–Bob

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Entry 484 — Another Exchange with an Academic

Thursday, August 18th, 2011

From New-Poetry yesterday and this morning (slightly revised for clarity):

B.G.: Here’s an easy question, David.  Do you think a book by an established critic like Vendler or Logan about 5 poets representing schools of poetry no established critic has every written seriously about, would be more worth writing than one about Levine?  

D.G.: Yes, that’s an easy question.  The answer is: it depends on what they write.

B.G.: Obviously, I meant if some critic like Vendler wrote a book of criticism at the level of the critic’s other works, which would you rather the critic write about–Five poets as written-about as Levine, or five poets representing schools no well-known critic has seriously written about.

D.G.: I don’t have opinions about work I haven’t read, and I don’t assume anything is automatically “better” based on the criteria that you

B.G.: Whenever anyone poses a question like mine, “better” means “according to the person asked.”  Why can’t you meet these simple questions head-on?

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D.G.:  This’ll be the last from me on this go-round, Bob.  

I did meet your question head-on.  I said that I don’t have an opinion on something I haven’t read.  So I don’t know which book would be “better,” even according to me.  I’d have to read it first.  Is that hard to fathom?

B.G.: To me, it is, David.  To me, what I’m asking, to rephrase to meet your weirdly insistent need to avoid answering my question, is which of the two works I mention do you believe you would turn out preferring having read if you were to read both.  The question underlying this is do you believe a book by a prominent critic about poetry doing things no prominent critic has written about would be more valuable than a book by the same critic, at the same level of effectiveness, about poetry doing things many prominent critics have discussed.

Your contention that you don’t have opinions about books that you haven’t read, by the way, seems unlikely.  How is it, for example, that you haven’t bought and read a book of my criticism but have bought and read many books by certified critics and read them if you started off having no opinion about any of those books?  Do you have to read every book you read through to the end to develop an opinion of it, on the grounds that you can’t have an opinion of any part you don’t read, and that you need to in order to have an opinion of the book as a whole?  Do you read every email sent you including spam all the way through?  You must if you read any of them since you can’t have an opinion of them without doing so.

I tend to think your outlook is based on a fear of expressing an opinion that most people will consider wrong.  I don’t have that fear, so am quite able to form and express opinions without full knowledge of every fact having to do with the subject my opinion is about.  I’m confident that if I’m wrong, I’ll be able to change my mind.  I’m also confident that this way I’ll be able to say many more interesting things than a person who fears looking bad.

D.G.: Nor do I think, as you evidently do, that it’s automatically “better” to pay attention to a given poet just because that style hasn’t been paid as much attention as, well, as the styles of poetry that most people actually enjoy reading.  

But how will you know that you won’t prefer the undiscussed style to the received style if all the commentators you’re willing to read won’t discuss it?  Isn’t that really having an opinion of something you haven’t read, the opinion being that it’s not at all a bad thing that only your sort of poetry be discussed by prominent critics?

D.G.: Plenty of great music to be written in C major, and all that.  There could be a great book on Levine being written right now, for all I know. 

B.G.: There’s nothing wrong with having an opinion before reading it that a book that has a 1% chance of saying something interesting about a much-discussed poet will be better than one that covers an unfamiliar kind of poetry, but why can’t you openly admit that you do?  I have no trouble stating that I think another book on Levine by some prominent critic will have no chance at all of being as valuable as a book by the same critic about the kind of poets you consider the equivalent of cowboys kicking moose skulls and calling it baseball (or something close to that).

 

Entry 447 — Me Versus Academia, Again

Monday, May 23rd, 2011

David Graham made one of his always reasonable, never alarming posts to a thread on a 1993 book of Heather McHugh’s about the use of fragments in poetry, Broken English.  He couldn’t keep from making what I took to be a crack at me, and was unable not to reply to.

.  .  . I think McHugh’s right–if I understand her point, what she’s talking about is not a particular technique but an effect reachable by various means at various times, one of those first principles that I referred to before.  The high modernists, who were crazy about collage, were in this light not inventing anything entirely new so much as finding a fresh path to an age-old destination.

(All worthy destinations are age-old?)

This principle of disjunction, then, is visible in Whitman’s whip-saw juxtapositions, Stein’s fracturing of syntax, Eliot’s fragments shored against the ruins, the electric leap in a haiku, surrealist imagery, and so forth, right up through more recent instances such as Ginsberg’s “hydrogen jukebox” and Ashbery’s ruminative ramblings.

I’m just thinking aloud here, and no doubt overgeneralizing, but it occurs to me that there is at least a kinship between poetry such as Dean Young’s and a lot of language-centered poetry with which it wouldn’t normally be compared.  Rather like Ashbery, Young employs utterly conventional syntax, image, and figure; but the results are most slippery and unparaphraseable.  He doesn’t fracture language itself, but there is plenty of disjunction and fragmentation at the conceptual level.

If you focus mostly on the easy binaries (style/theme; free verse/meter; traditional/experimental) you would naturally miss recognizing this sort of kinship.  If, for example, all your definitions of poetry focused relentlessly on
purely technical matters such as the handling of syntax.

My response: “I suppose if you focused all your consideration of poetry on the techniques objectively distinguishing each kind from all others, you’d possibly miss as much as ten percent of the things you’d miss if you focused it only on the trivial kinships that can be found between any two kinds of poems.  (Note: there is more to appreciating poetry than defining it, although that’s the most important part of intelligently appreciating it.)”

In a second post, I opined that “all worthy destinations are much more age-old than new, but never not-new in some significant way.”

Entry 433 — Graham vs. Grumman, Part 99999

Monday, April 25th, 2011

It started with David Graham posting the following poem to New-Poetry:

.              Mingus at The Showplace
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.              I was miserable, of course, for I was seventeen,
.              and so I swung into action and wrote a poem,
.              and it was miserable, for that was how I thought
.              poetry worked: you digested experience and shat
.              literature. It was 1960 at The Showplace, long since
.              defunct, on West 4th St., and I sat at the bar,
.              casting beer money from a thin reel of ones,
.              the kid in the city, big ears like a puppy.
.              And I knew Mingus was a genius. I knew two
.              other things, but as it happened they were wrong.
.              So I made him look at the poem.
.              “There’s a lot of that going around,” he said,
.              and Sweet Baby Jesus he was right. He glowered
.              at me but he didn’t look as if he thought
.              bad poems were dangerous, the way some poets do.
.              If they were baseball executives they’d plot
.              to destroy sandlots everywhere so that the game
.              could be saved from children. Of course later
.              that night he fired his pianist in mid-number
.              and flurried him from the stand.
.              “We’ve suffered a diminuendo in personnel,”
.              he explained, and the band played on.
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.                                                           William Matthews
.                                                           Time & Money
.                                                            Houghton Mifflin Company
.
I Liked it for the same reasons I like many of Charles Bukowski’s poems, so I said, “Good poem. Makes me wonder if he was influenced or influenced Bukowski.  Seems like something by Bukowski, Wilshberianized.”

Mike Snider responded that “Matthews was a far better poet than Bukowski thought himself to be, and he did indeed know his jazz. At the other end of some cultural curve, I love his translations of Horace and Martial.

“And I love your work, Bob, but ‘Wilshberia’ is getting quite a bit past annoying.”

I may be unique among Internetters in that when I post something and someone (other than a troll) responds to it, I almost always carry on the discussion. I did that here: “I think Bukowski at his rawest best was equal to Matthews, but extremely uneven. One of his poems about a poetry reading has the same charge for me that this one of Matthews’s has. I haven’t read enough Mattews to know, but suspect he wrote more good poems than Bukowski did.

“(As for my use of ‘Wilshberia,” I’m sorry, Mike, but it can’t be more annoying to you than Finnegan’s constant announcements of prizes to those who never work outside Wilshberia are to those of us who do our best work outside of it, prizelessly. Also, I contend that it is a useful, accurate term. And descriptive, not derogatory.”

At this point David Graham took over for Mike with some one of his charateristics attempts at wit: “Sorry, Mike, but I have to agree with Bob here. Just as he says, ‘Wilshberia’ is a useful, accurate term, in that it allows someone to see little important difference between the work of Charles Bukowski and William Matthews.

“Think how handy to have such a term in your critical vocabulary. Consider the time saved. Sandburg and Auden: pretty much the same. Shakespeare and Marlowe: no big diff. Frost and Stevens: who could ever tell them apart?

“It’s like you were an entomologist, and classified all insects into a) Dryococelus australis (The Lord Howe Stick Insect) and b) other bugs.”

Professor Graham is always most wittily condescending when he’s sure he has ninety percent of the audience behind him, which was sure to be the case here.

Needless to say, I fired back: “Seeing a similarity between those two is different from seeing “little important difference between” them, as even an academic should be able to understand.

“Wilshberia, for those who can read, describes a continuum of poetry ranging from very formal poetry to the kind of jump-cut free association of the poetry of Ashbery. The sole thing the poets producing the poetry on it have in common is certification by academics.

“No, David, (it’s not like being an entomologist who “classified all insects into a} Dryococelus australis [The Lord Howe Stick Insect] and b} other bugs). Because visual poetry, sound poetry, performance poetry, cyber poetry, mathematical poetry, cryptographic poetry, infraverbal poetry, light verse, contragenteel poetry, haiku (except when a side-product of a certified poet) and no doubt others I’m not aware of or that have slipped my mind are meaninglessly unimportant to academics as dead to what poems can do that wasn’t widely done fifty or more years ago as you does not mean they are the equivalent on a continuum of possible poetries to a Lord Howe Stick Insect in a continuum of possible insects.” Then I thanked the professor for “another demonstration of the academic position.”

My opponent wasn’t through: “A rather nice nutshell of my oft-expressed reservation about Bob’s critical habits above. Note how in his definition of Wilshberia above, ‘the sole thing’ that characterizes such poetry is ‘certification by academics.’ I think we all know what ‘sole’ means. OK, then, it has nothing whatsoever to do, say, with technical concerns. There is no meaningful aesthetic distinction involved. And thus it is obviously not definable according to whether it is breaking new technical ground, because “the sole thing” that defines it is whether academics ‘certify’ it, whatever that means. And as we well know, academics tend to appreciate a spectrum of verse, from the traditional forms and themes of a Wilbur to the fragmentation and opacity of various poets in the language-centered realm.

“But look at the second paragraph above. What are academics being accused of? Oh, it seems we don’t appreciate poetry that breaks new technical ground or challenges our aesthetics. We don’t like poetry of various aesthetic stripes recognized as important by Bob.

“Whether or not that accusation is even true (another argument), does anyone else see a certain logical problem here?”

I didn’t say much. Only that he was wrong that “There is no meaningful aesthetic distinction involved” involved in my characterization of Wilshberia because aesthetic distinctions are involved to the degree that they affect academic certifiability, which they must–as must whether the poetry of Wilshberia is breaking new technical ground.

I proceeded to say, “The meaning of academic certification should be self-evident. It is anything professors do to indicate to the media and commercial publishers and grants-bestowers that certain poems are of cultural value. Certification is awarded (indirectly) by teaching certain poems and poets–and not others; writing essays and books on certain poems and poets–and not others; paying certain poets and not others to give readings or presentations at their universities; and so forth. What (the great majority of) academics have been certifying in this way for fifty years or more is the poetry of Wilshberia.” “Only,” I would now add.

I also noted that I had I previously defined Wilshberia solely as academically certified poetry. “Implicitly, though,” I claimed, “I also defined it as poetry ranging in technique from Wilbur’s to Ashbery’s. Since that apparently wasn’t clear, let me redefine Wilshberia as “a continuum of that poetry ranging from very formal poetry to the kind of jump-cut free association of the poetry of Ashbery which the academy has certified (in the many ways the academy does that, i.e., by exclusively teaching it, exclusively writing about it, etc.)”

Oh, and I disagreed that ” . . . as we well know, academics tend to appreciate a spectrum of verse, from the traditional forms and themes of a Wilbur to the fragmentation and opacity of various poets in the language-centered realm.”

“My claim,” said I, “remains that the vast majority of them think when they say they like all kinds of poets from Wilbur to Ashbery that they appreciate all significant forms of poetry. I have previously named many of the kinds they are barely aware of, if that.”

That was enough for the professor.  He retired to an exchange with New-Poetry’s nullospher, Halvard Johnson, about not having a certificate indicating he was a poet in good standing.

 

Entry 357 — The Smugness of Wilshberians

Monday, January 24th, 2011

To keep posting a daily entry, here’s a post I wrote a month-and-a-half ago in response to David Graham, who near-perfectly personifies the Wilshberian:

Let’s run a bit with the sports analogy. Wilshberia as Bob tends to define it would not just include the major & minor leagues of pro baseball, but every single college, high school, middle school, and community league. Plus sandlot games, softball at company picnics & family reunions.  Fathers playing catch with kids in the back yard, too, of course.  Oh, and naturally all games overseas, not to mention computer baseball games & fantasy leagues.

What wouldn’t the label encompass?

Well, such things as two guys in Havre, Montana who like to kick a deer skull back & forth and call it “baseball.”  Sure, there’s no bat, ball, gloves, diamond, fans, pitcher, or catcher– but they do call it baseball, and wonder why the mainstream media consistently fails to mention their game.

Our minds seem to be running in parallel, David.  I was just thinking that the reason no academics have or can come up with a (better) term for Wilshberia (which they consider derogatory although I consider it descriptive) is that they think it the whole of poetry, so not needing a name.  In other words, for them the range of poetry from Wilbur’s to Ashbery’s is the complete range of poetry.  And people like me, who compose things we think are poems but which are considerably different from anything Wilshberian poets are composing should not mind being considered no more poets than “two guys in Havre, Montana who like to kick a deer skull back & forth” are baseball players.