Archive for the ‘Suchoon Mo’ Category
Entry 424 — A Non-Haiku
Saturday, April 16th, 2011
Over at Otherstream Unlimited people are posting opinions and other stuff in short texts they are calling “haiku” simply because they consist of three lines, a seven-syllable one in the middle of two five-syllable ones. There’s a lot more to haiku than that. So I posted the following to the group:
. haiku seem stupid
. only to those dumb enough
. to think this is one
Suchoon Mo then commented:
.
. ha ha ha ha ha
. ha ha ho ho ha ha ha
. ho ho ha ha ha!
I may get something of consequence done today, but not here.
It’s obviously not a haiku because there’s no season word. Unless it’s implied when the reader falls for it. ha ha ha ha ha.
– endwar
umph.