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Entry 424 — A Non-Haiku

Saturday, April 16th, 2011

Over at Otherstream Unlimited people are posting opinions and other stuff in short texts they are calling “haiku” simply because they consist of three lines, a seven-syllable one in the middle of two five-syllable ones.  There’s a lot more to haiku than that.  So I posted the following to the group:

.                                           haiku seem stupid
.                                           only to those dumb enough
.                                           to think this is one

Suchoon Mo then commented:
.
.                                            ha ha ha ha ha
.                                            ha ha ho ho ha ha ha
.                                            ho ho ha ha ha!

I may get something of consequence done today, but not here.

Entry 424 — A Non-Haiku « POETICKS

Entry 424 — A Non-Haiku

Over at Otherstream Unlimited people are posting opinions and other stuff in short texts they are calling “haiku” simply because they consist of three lines, a seven-syllable one in the middle of two five-syllable ones.  There’s a lot more to haiku than that.  So I posted the following to the group:

.                                           haiku seem stupid
.                                           only to those dumb enough
.                                           to think this is one

Suchoon Mo then commented:
.
.                                            ha ha ha ha ha
.                                            ha ha ho ho ha ha ha
.                                            ho ho ha ha ha!

I may get something of consequence done today, but not here.

2 Responses to “Entry 424 — A Non-Haiku”

  1. endwar says:

    It’s obviously not a haiku because there’s no season word. Unless it’s implied when the reader falls for it. ha ha ha ha ha.
    :-)

    – endwar

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