Posts Tagged ‘vispo’

Entry 128 — Vispo Sketches

Wednesday, May 5th, 2010

Well, I’m trying to get back on track but having a tough time of it.  I had ideas while taking hours to get to sleep last night, most of them variations on the idea my “sleep” poem is based on (which I’m pretty sure I stole from Marton).  So I tried one of them out at Paint Shop and had all kinds of trouble.  The first is the upper one below.  I intended it merely as the first step from my “sleep” poem to a new poem but liked what it did, so left it as a variation.  Minor but satisfactory.  I don’t like the one under it.  One error is the font of the central “gh.”  I don’t know how it got there.  I’m too worn out to change it, which (for me) would be more involved than you might suspect.  So I consider it a rough draft.  I no longer know whether to bother fixing it.  Nonetheless, it’s a Major Accomplishment compared to just about everything else I’ve been doing these past twelve months or so.  And it and its companion got me a third consecurive daily blog entry!  Whee.

Entry 62 — An Apple from #728

Saturday, January 2nd, 2010

There are a number of current visual poets who do not consider the above poem, one of the most popular visual poems of all-time, highly. So, to continue to be a Prime Annoyer in vispo circles, I’ve taken it upon myself to defend it. On the surface, it is merely a specimen of visual onomatopoeia, or poem whose text says what it looks like–or, if you prefer, poem whose graphic elements show what its text says. I think even those who don’t think much of it would admit that it was clever and effective for its time. I think it may be more.

What I like about it, what I think makes it special, is its worm. I believe its critics fail to appreciate how subtle it is. I doubt a person who has never seen the poem, particularly a person with little or no experience with visual poetry, will find it right off. If he does, it will act as a welcome counter to the boredom generated by all those instances of “apfel.” It will also seem apt. A rather fakey apple has become a real, flawed apple. Or does the poem suddenly concern not an apple but a worm in his home? In any event, it must take on larger symbolic meanings–about decay, the impossibility of perfection, the secretive intrusion of evil, etc. The glossy glibness of the apple makes it possibly a parody of magazine advertising–which is carried out with attractive pictures concealing worms.

Note, too, that the worm does not share the apple’s onomatopoeia–that is, it doesn’t look much like a wiggly thin worm. So it’s breaking with the rest of the poem is all the stronger.

Conclusion: the poem may not be a masterpiece of the first order, but it does not reflect unfavorably on Visual Poetry, as some contend. Indeed, I wish the distance from such a work of most art called “visual poetry” by its makers were considerably less.

Entry 48 — Full Effectiveness in Poetry

Saturday, December 19th, 2009

I’m skipping ahead to old blog entry #796 today to make a point about my recent cryptographiku. #796 has Cor van den Heuvel’s poem:

.                                               tundra

I go on in the entry to say I believe Eugen Gomringer’s “Silencio,” of 1954, was the first poem to make consequential  visiophorically expressive use of blank space:

.                      silencio silencio silencio
.                      silencio silencio silencio
.                      silencio          silencio
.                      silencio silencio silencio
.                      silencio silencio silencio

I finish my brief commentary but then opining that van den Heuvel’s poem was the first to make an entire page expressive, the first to make full-scale negative space its most important element. Rather than surround a meaningful parcel of negative space like Gomringer’s masterpiece, it is surrounded by meaningful negative space. I’m certainly not saying it thus surpasses Gomringer’s poem; what it does is equal it in a new way.

I consider it historically important also for being, so far as I know, the first single word to succeed entirely by itself in being a poem of the first level.

Then there’s my poem from 1966:

.                 at his desk
.                         the boy,

.                                writing his way into b wjwje tfdsfu xpsme

This claim to be the first poem in the world to use coding to significant metaphorical effect. Anyone who has followed what I’ve said about “The Four Seasons” should have no trouble deciphering this. I consider it successful as a poem because I believe anyone reasonably skillful at cyrptographical games will be able (at some point if not on a first reading) to emotionally (and sensually) understand/appreciate the main things it’s doing and saying during one reading of it–i.e., read it normally to the coded part, then translate that while at the same time being aware of it as coded material and understanding and appreciating the metaphor its being coded allows.

I’ve decided “The Four Seasons” can’t work like that. It is a clever gadget but not an effective poem because I can’t see anyone being able to make a flowing reading through it and emotionally (and sensually) understanding/appreciating everything that’s going on in it and what all its meanings add up to, even after study and several readings. Being able to understand it the way I do in my explanation of it not enough. This is a lesson from the traditional haiku, which must be felt as experience, known reducticeptually (intellectually), too, but only unconsciously–at the time of reading it as a poem rather than as an object of critical scrutiny, which is just as valid a way to read it but different.

Entry 39 — 3 by Endwar

Thursday, December 10th, 2009

They’re from #674.

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#673 had two poems by John Elsbergs from his Runaway Spoon Press book, Broken Poems for Evita. One was this:

          RAISING EVA

          (Or, the myth of art and politics)

          L

              EVITA

          tio        nis

               th           EPRE

                     fer

               RED        al        TERN

                     at        ivefor

          thosewhona                t         UR

                        ALLY          S

                                                     inK

And that’s it for this entry.    (Am I feeling more worn out than ever for no reason?  Yes.)

Entry 32 — A Mathemaku from 2007

Thursday, December 3rd, 2009

I continue to be more out of it than not, so have just this for today:

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Guess who composed it.

Entry 31 — Old Blog Entries 663 through 670

Wednesday, December 2nd, 2009

In #663, I presented my Odysseus Suite–but the reproduction is too crude for me to re-post it here.   My nest entry featured this, by Endwar:

TenByTenAs I announced when I first posted this, I am hoping to publish an antho- logy of mathematical poems, like this one, so if you have one or know of one, send me a copy of it, or tell me about it.

#665 had this by Marton Koppany, which I have to post here because it was dedicated to ME:

Odysseus

Hey, it’s mathematical, too.  The next entry, whose number I fear to state, concerned this:

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This is from Typewriter Poems, an anthology published by Something Else Press and Second Aeon back in 1972. It’s by Alison Bielski, An English woman born in 1925 whose work I’m unfamiliar with. I find this specimen a charmer . . . but am not sure what to make of it. Three lines, as in the classic haiku. The middle one is some sort of filter. Is “n” the “n” in so much mathematics? If so, what’s the poem saying? And where does the night and stars Hard for me not to assume come in? Pure mathematics below, a sort of practical mathematics above? That idea would work better for me if the n’s were in the lower group rather than in the other. Rather reluctantly, I have to conclude the poem is just a texteme design. I hope someone more clever sets me right, though. (I’m pretty sure I’ve seen later visio-textual works using the same filter idea–or whatever the the combination of +’s. =’s and n’s is, but can’t remember any details.)

It was back to my lifelong search for a word meaning “partaker of artwork” in #667–but I now believe “aesthimbiber,” which I thought of in a post earlier than #667, I believe, but dropped, may be the winner of my search.

Next entry topic was about what visual poets might do to capture a bigger audience.  I said nothing worth reposting on a topic going nowhere because visual poets, in general, are downright inimical to doing anything as base as trying to increase their audience.   One suggestion I had was to post canonical poems along with visual poems inspired by them, which I mention because in my next entry, I did just that, posting a Wordsworth sonnet and a visual poem I did based on and quoting part of it–and don’t re-post here because of space limitations.  I wrote about the two in the final entry in this set of ten old blog entries.

Entry 27 — Two By J. Michael Mollohan

Saturday, November 28th, 2009

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Just the two pieces above from #657  today–’cause I’m tired and my back and right leg ache from having played tennis this morning (horrid-badly).  I have sciatica and wrong thought I might be over it.  I’m not.

Entry 14 — Back to My Old Blog Entries

Sunday, November 15th, 2009

I remain blank in the brain, so will return to my old project of revisiting old blogs in hopes that will get me going again.  A check of my back-ups indicates I made my last entry to the old blog 27 October.  In it and the entry just before it, I reported on my last trip to the hospital.  My entry for 25 October was the last in which I discussed old entries, getting to #610.  So I will turn now to some fumbly work with letters I did in #611:

Letter-Blocks1These seem to me like they ought to be interesting but they don’t grab me, at all.  In #612, I reported that I’d gotten an e.mail from an old literary friend (and early buyer of A StrayngeBook), Fred Stokes.  A not-too-interesting entry on Me followed, then this, which I quote in full more to give an idea of where my head was at the time than because it says very much:

“7 October 2005: Or, to continue my musing of yesterday (about the effectiveness of my aging brain), maybe I’m just recycling ideas I’ve had for decades. Whether original for me or just recycling, I think my putting literature into four classes, narrature, anthroture, evocature and poetry was nutty. Just a momentary aberration, I hope. I have nothing against the over-all concept, however. Ergo, I am rephrasing it today in a single statement: Every poem has four zones of operation: (1) the sagaceptual (or narrative) zone, (2) the anthroceptual (or people-related) zone, (3) the protoceptual (or imagery-centered) zone and (4) the reducticeptual (or technique-focused) zone. What the poem does as a story, what it does as self-expression, what it does as an evocation of a scene or object, and what it does as a mechanism or (i.e., how its grammar works, what its form does, what–in the case of my mathemaku–its mathematics does, and so forth). Right now, I can think of no other operational zones it might have (but would not be at all surprised if it had others, even very obvious others).”

I should have mentioned that there’s no such thing, in my poetics, as an idea-centered poem.  That’s because a text primarily about an idea would not be a work of literature but of what I call “informrature,” the use of words in pursuit of some truth.  Ideas can be important in poems, as is the case with many of Wallace Stevens’s, but only for what they allow the poem to do as (usually) protoceptually.

#615 and #616 continue my discussion of zones with the addition of two new ones, one (the verbo-protceptual zone) for verbally-mediated sensory perceptions (as opposed to direct ones like the sound of the words used), and one (the verbo-reducticeptual zone) for the ideas or thought of a poem. I had scanted the latter because I believe any text with a significant amount of ideas disbarred from being a poem–it must be either advocature or informrature (i.e., propaganda or nonfiction). I now realize that all poems have ideas, however vague, and some them to a significant degree (although, I contend, never are they the most important elements in the poems).  So almost every poem will to some degree enter an idea-zone.

The center of interest in #617 was the zero-onset, which is the blank onset (or absense of consonant) that begins some syllables–as in “out,” or “or,” for instance.  Next I took up vowels that act as consonants the way the u in use does, and the o in “one.”   My last two entries in this set of ten have two versions of a mathemaku I was working on:

12Oct-A12Oct-BIt’s not quite there, but I think it has the potential to be Major.  The pond, it should be obvious, is a cousin of Basho’s.

Entry 4 — The Nature of Visual Poetry, Part 2

Thursday, November 5th, 2009

Note to anyone dedicatedly trying to understand my essay, you probably should reread yesterday’s segment, for I’ve revised it.  Okay, now back to:

The Nature of Visual Poetry

As a visual poem, Biloid’s “Parrots” is eventually processed in two significantly different major awarenesses, the protoceptual and the reducticeptual.   In the protoceptual awareness, the processing occurs in the Visioceptual Awareness, to which it directly proceeds.  In the reducticeptual awareness, it first goes to  the Linguiceptual Awareness, which is divided into five lesser sub-awarenesses, the Lexiceptual, Texticeptual, Dicticeptual, Vocaceptual, Rhythmiceptual and Metriceptual.  The first is in charge of the written word, the second of the spoken word, the third of vocalization, the fourth of the rhythm of speech and the fifth of the meter of speech.  Of these, the linguiceptual awareness passes “Parrots” on only to the first, the lexiceptual  awareness, because “Parrots” is written, not spoken.  Since the single word that comprises its text will be recognized as a word there, it will reach its final cerebral destination, the Verbiceptual Awareness.

The engagent of “Parrots” will thus experience it as both a visioceptual and a verbiceptual knowlecule, or unit of knowledge–at about the same time.  Visually and verbally, the first because it is visual, the second because it is a poem and thus necessarily verbal.  Clearly, it is substantially more than a conventional poem, which would be processed entirely by its engagent’s verboceptual awareness.

Okay, this essay, only about a thousand words in length so far, is already a mess.  Yes, way too many terms.  And I keep needing to revise it for clarity.  Or, at least, to reduce its obscurity.  I have trouble following it myself.  My compositional purpose right now, though, is to get everything down.  Later, I’ll simplify, if I can.

Entry 3 — The Nature of Visual Poetry, Part 1

Wednesday, November 4th, 2009

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The image above is from the catalogue of a show I co-curated in Cleveland that Michael Rothenberg was kind enough to give space to in Big Bridge #12–with two special short gatherings of pieces from the show, with commentary by me.  I have it here to provide relief from my verosophizing (note: “verosophy” is my word for serious truth-seeking–mainly in science, philosophy, and history).  It’s also a filler, for I’ve had too tough a day (doctor visits, marketing, phoning people about bills) to do much of an entry.

It’s not a digression, though–I will come back to it, as a near-perfect example of a pure visual poem.

Now, briefly, to avoid Total Vocational Irresponsibility, back to:

the Nature of Visual Poetry

The pre-awareness is a sort of confederacy of primary pre-aware- nesses, one for each of the senses.  Each primary pre-awareness is in turn a confederacy of specialized secondary pre-awarenesses such as the visiolinguistic pre-awareness in the visual pre-awareness and the audiolinguistic pre-awareness in the auditory pre-awareness.  Each incoming perceptual cluster (or “pre-knowlecule,” or “knowlecule-in-progress,” by which I mean cluster of percepts, or “atoms of perception,” which have the potential to form full-scale pieces of knowledge such as the visual appearance of a robin, that I call “knowlecules”) enters one of the primary pre-awarenesses, from which it is sent to all the many secondary pre-awarenesses within that primary pre-awareness.

The secondary pre-awarenesses, in turn, screen the pre-knowlecules entering them, accepting for further processing those they are designed to, rejecting all others.  The visiolinguistic pre-awareness thus accepts percepts that pass its tests for textuality, and reject all others; the audiolinguistic pre-awareness tests for speech; and so on.  More on this tomorrow, I hope.