Archive for the ‘Of Poem’ Category

Entry 398 — “The Tide,” a Poem Poem

Sunday, March 6th, 2011

.            The Tide

.            A long stare smelled its way
.            past the lantern’s purpled lisp
.            against kerosene mares radiant in
.            the prenatal barn storm
.            that Poem
.            was tearing the petals off of.
.            Behind him, the Hawaiian sidewalk
.            sidled dangerously into a canasta game,
.            like misspelled lemonade
.            remembering where the jewels were.

.            The tide was later than usual.
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I threw the above together so as to have something here.  Believe it or not, I then revised it!  I only changed a few lines, though.

I’m beginning to think I’ll never have a blog entry with any real content again.  A real disaster, Kevin Kelly is now prowling this here territory, lookin’ for poems to throttle, and he’s brutal.  I could deal with him back when he lived in or around Port Charlotte, but he’s gotten a lot meaner since he moved.

Entry 395 — “An Alphabet for Aram Saroyan”

Thursday, March 3rd, 2011

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Taken from my Comprepoetica blog entry of 30 April 2008.  And here’s something from my 8 May 2008 entry I like:

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.            After a Long Day
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.            Slop slap.
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.            Poem weigh 186,
.            but his sleep weighed
.            (slip slope sleep)
.            the color of algebra,
.            mastered.
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.            sloop

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Entry 393 — Two Completely Forgotten Poems

Tuesday, March 1st, 2011

They’re from another March 2008 blog entry:

I like these, especially the first.  I think I’ll change “flow” in the second to “river” or “the Euphrates.”

I also came across a Poem poem I’d forgotten about but think is one of my better Poem poems:

.                          Early One

.                          As the soon light’s wasn’ting
.                          n’ticed her lone grey
.                          way into where
.                          stones he’d,
.                          Poem exmerged, easea-eyes
.                          primed, calculiz’d firmly
.                          into the long-lost hum
.                          of paraclowned beach at
.                          the font-edge of recorded time.

.                          Hinderly, a Missa Solemnis
.                          averaged.
.                          Soome remoote just tooed.
.                          But regions of total hint
.                          blistened ever more
.                          only entransically toward.

Entry 390 — Two Poems from three Years Ago

Saturday, February 26th, 2011

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Just about three years ago I wrote a version of the following poem:

.             Poem has a question

.             Whose sleep is the sky?
.             For hours and
.             hours Poem
.             wondered.

I improved it just now by deleting its previous two last words, “about that.”

Note: I find that the day after I wrote the above, I “improved” it by adding ten or twelve lines to it.  I hereby disown that version.

The following is a re-done poem I sent a year or more earlier to something going on in Mexico.  I was trying to do something with the show’s theme of International friendship, or something.  Barely worth keeping, I’d say but may some will enjoy it.

Note: as should be obvious from the way I strained to find things for this entry, I’m still blah.

Enter 382 — “Poem’s Intractability”

Friday, February 18th, 2011

.                               Poem’s Intractability
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.                               The rotund smell of electricity
.                               shimmered left of less
.                               as the maple syrup
.                               made up its mind
.                               in the Bearden colors
.                               wearing brighter against
.                               the kindergarten laughter
.                               Sambo was racing behind
.                               while, several darknesses
.                               in front of the scene,
.                               The tigered past
.                               dallied
.                               resolutely into the center
.                               of Poem’s intractability,
.                               permanently unrescuable.
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I had nothing else for this entry. The above, due–I’m sure–to a dumb discussion of a controversy recently in the news concerning whether a poem by Wilshberian poet, Tony Hoagland, that is insipidly slightly slighting of Venus Williams should be denounced as offensive, came very easily. Not much to it, and more a political point of view than I think poems should be, but it may not be too bad.

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Entry 326 — “Poem, Free of the Rhyme”

Sunday, December 26th, 2010

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.                     Poem, Free of the Rhyme
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.                     It was pouring so hard that Poem’s
.                     umbrella couldn’t keep him dry,
.                     but that didn’t bother him,
.                     nor did the fact that
.                     he didn’t know where he was.
.                     The important thing was
.                     that he was somewhere.
.                     He’d been shaken by the presence
.                     of his author in the rhyme
.                     he’d previously been in,
.                     fearful that his author
.                     had decided to become the speaker
.                     in the poems he composed
.                     and thus would no longer need his services
.                     as his alter ego.  Not that he more
.                     than once or twice had liked
.                     being in the texts he’d been put in–
.                     he’d yet to score a piece of ass,
.                     for instance.   But better there,
.                     or here, soaked, in the dullest of words,
.                     than non-existent.

Entry 254 — Another Not Quite Null Day

Thursday, October 14th, 2010

I now have one more regular blog visitor.  Unfortunately, he’s a school-marm, when he isn’t reporting various Internet posters to the police, or threatening to do so.  He’s a good spell-checker, though.  He’s also an Emperor-tripper–i.e., a person who trails pundits and would-be pundits around hoping to catch them in errors of spelling, grammar, minor logic or the like, which he then publicizes at the Internet news groups he’s in, none of them with any significant membership.  So, because of him, I just now changed my spelling of “Excalibur” in the rough draft of a possible poem I posted the other day.  The school-marm is a mildly interesting specimen, but he’s good at sidetracking his victims into moronic arguments (and I’m a sucker for moronic arguments) so I have to try my best to resist arguing with him.

I’m close to actually getting to work on one of my projects that I think has commercial possibilities.  Since I seem to have an actual commericial agent interested in my work, I really should get on it.  Today’s excuse for not is that I have a meeting of my little local writers’ group coming up in another hour or so.  I have to get some stuff together to take to it.  Would really like to get a poem done I’m working on, but don’t think I’ll be able to.

On the health front, my good/bad news is that when I played tennis this morning, I felt my bad leg was at 60% running strength instead of the 20% it’s been most other times I’ve played, although two days ago it was also at 60%.   This is good because it makes me almost able to actually play the game–because I can go after balls rather than lean toward them, which was about all I could do before my back operation.  I can also get set for shots I have time to get set for, which was hard for me before.  It’s bad because I’m still far from where I was 14 months or so ago, when I felt like I was almost pretty good.

My mood remains okay.  I actually feel disappointed at night when I have to go to bed, and in the morning no longer consider the day ahead something to get through.  The project I hope to get into very soon will be an excellent test of how well I’m actually doing.

So much for this entry.  Pretty blah, but I’m still getting at least one entry a day done!

Poem, Buoyant in Another Rough Draft

By chance, the Philistines
encounter
Excalibarge planging unduteously
out of one text poem had visited
into another.
Tinslicoricely grinding gears they
can’t
change, the philistines burble their
HA HAs
over the Rhine maidens’ golden simper
Poem was gimboling through,
exuberantly lithing into where
the December’s hindsight
exonerated even
his grammar,
though not his bald head.

Entry 252 — 12 October 2010 Report

Tuesday, October 12th, 2010

I did more work on my essay concerning aesthetics.  I’m burned out on it now, but it’s still not right.  I have to leave it for a while.  I’m burned out on about everything, it would appear.  Can’t think of anything concerning poetry I feel like writing about.  My heath seems okay, and I’m not sleepy.  The pain pills I’ve been taking have helped with that, and with my hip, which held up moderately well earlier when I played tennis.  I think I’ll need hip replacement surgery, anyway.  I want to get a shot for my hip before I do, though.  I’m hopeful that will be enough to get me back to feeling the way I think I should.

Possible rough draft currently taking shape:

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.                         Poem, Nearing the Center

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.                         Swans wrinkled
.                         against Poem’s current memory of
.                         Excalibur
.                         multiplied by lake-grey branches
.                         simpling deeper than winter.
.                         A bridge hand glows
.                         through a made finesse
.                         toward game bid and made
.                         in the wake of
.                         Brillo pads renewing the white shine
.                         of a toilet bowl.
.                         Holy smoke
.                         so slowly centering
.                         the universe
.                         as the next hand is dealt.
.                         Model T’s coming off the
.                         assembly line
.                         proving mankind
.                         ocean-eminent
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Entry 231 — “Poem, More Nowhere Than Ever”

Friday, September 24th, 2010

.       Poem, More Nowhere Than Ever

.       For a long time Poem
.       had blithely gone along with his
.       role as an alter ego, even after Criticism
.       had bothered him about it, somewhere
.       off-page. He was not by nature
.       particularly self-analytical. Aside
.       from that, his surroundings generally
.       were interesting enough to keep
.       him out of his self. Lately,
.       though, the texts he found himself
.       part of, like the present
.       one forced him to ask him what he
.       was doing with his life–which in term
.       caused him to wonder what his life
.       was.

.       Criticism loaned him the two chapbooks
.       he’d so far been in. They reminded him
.       of his supposed ancestors but they
.       seemed to have too little in common
.       with even his best self-image to help
.       him sort out things.

.       For the hell of it, he decided to write
.       a poem himself. “For a long time,
.       Bob Grumman had blithely gone along
.       with his role as source ego for
.       a being vastly his superior
.       whom he tortured by confining him
.       to the stupidest, dullest texts in
.       ever conceived.” Alas, he didn’t enjoy
.       his game for long. Too many others
.       had played it before he had, and
.       played it better.

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Entry 230 — “Poem’s Worst Where”

Thursday, September 23rd, 2010

 

.          Poem’s Worst Where

.          Poem didn’t know where he was.
.          He barely knew who he was.
.          Whatever text he was in, and
.          he was never anywhere
.          but in a text, said his
.          author was desperate to
.          fill a blog entry, so
.          here he was. The
.          hope was
.          that
.          something would happen
.          to him that
.          would make the text
.          he was in worthwhile.

.          “What is poetry?” he asked.
.          He was made to ask.
.          Poetry is words.
.          Poetry is words but needn’t be
.          only words.
.          Poetry is not prose.
.          The object of poetry is to evoke
.          in as sensually rich a form
.          as possible an image.
.          Prose is only concerned with describing.

.          Poetry wants to capture you, prose to move
.          you to what’s next. Hence,
.          lineation. A poem is
.          an expanding stasis, prose
.          a motion.

.          “Can I go back to bed now?”
.          Poem asked. He was allowed to.

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