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Entry 743 — “Poem, Null Again”

Saturday, May 19th, 2012

.          Poem, Null Again

.          The sun was bright but gray.
.          Poem tried to color a path into
.          some dream about King Arthur
.          a drunken Supreme Court Justice
.          was trying to escape,
.          but no color would take, the sun
.          he now realized, was only the idea of
.          the sun, the poem he was in
.          the idea of its light.
.          He tried to sing a path into the dream,
.          but his notes turned to snow
.          long before achieving sound,
.          and buried both the Justice
.          and the dream of King Arthur.
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Entry 719 — The Low Appeal of my Poems

Wednesday, April 25th, 2012

Come, if you will, into my poetry.  Bring a map: new territories require maps.  But don’t cling to your map.

I’m thinking once again about why my poems are’t liked by others as much as I like them–at least some of them.  There isn’t much variation in my answers to the question, but they are almost always a bit different.  They always acknowledge, too, that the problem may be that my poems are crap.  I can’t accept this.  Usually, I contend, as I will here, that they are too A for half their prospective likers to like, and too B for the other half to like.  This time the A is their being postcard picture lyrical, the B their being technically unconventional.  Those who love Frost’s woods filling up with snow as much as I do will be put off by how unorthodxically I bring my versions of his snow to them while those who might be excited by my originality of technique will be put off by my use of it to showcase the stockest of images.  Images too resolutely knit into unified wholes, I might add, the current fashion among those at the cutting edge of taste in “difficult poetry” greatly preferring discontinuities to  my unwillingness to free my images too completely from one another.

Of course, I do understand that my works are poems, and thus will have a low appeal for almost everyone.

Meanwhile, I continue more and more to be defined by my physical ailments.  I’ve been feeling barely so-so–after taking pain medication, the past few days.  That may be more due to my anti-biotic than to what’s wrong with me, who knows.  I have just three more days of the anti-biotic, assuming it’s working, and I believe it is.

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Entry 673 — “Mathemaku for Basho”

Saturday, March 3rd, 2012

I’m not sure when I made this mathemaku–two or three years ago, is my guess. I’ve probably posted it before, but this is a touched up, slightly altered new version:

 

It’s built around a famous haiku by Basho: “on a withered branch/ a crow has settled;/autumn nightfall.”  The Japanese in my rendering translates as “autumn fnightfall.”  My divisor comes out of who-knows-where, but my remainder alludes to a distant sail in a rendering of a Chinese poem by Ezra Pound.  My quotient is a fragment of a map of Norwalk Harbor on Long Island Sound overlaid with portions of a Sam Fancis painting severely reworked in Paint Shop.  The sub-dividend product consists of the SamFrancisfied Harbor in full, and the background graphics are also alterations of portions of the Francis painting.  Fadings, fragmentations, disappearings, endings . . .

I don’t consider this one of my A works, but would be satisfied if all my works seemed as good to me as it.

 

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Entry 667 — Re: “Revelation”

Sunday, February 26th, 2012

There’s little to say about the above except that I consider it a joke that can be taken to thoughts quite deep once you’ve carefully examined it.

A hint to solve it, written in reverse so you won’t accidentally see it and miss the fun of solving it without help: drow a rof kool.

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Entry 666 — Some Boilerplate from Me on the Value of Criticism.

Saturday, February 25th, 2012

Here’s a quotation from Randall Jarrell that I completely disagree with: “Remember . . . that criticism is no more than (and no less than) the helpful remarks and the thoughtful and disinterested judgment of a reader, a loving and experienced and able reader, but only a reader. . . “  I say a great critic of a poem about daffodils, say, equals the creator of the poem–why should something brilliant about a poem about daffodils not be as valuable as something brilliant about daffodils?  I find Eliot the critic as worth reading as Eliot the Poet; Ditto Coleridge.  Hayden is as worth reading as most poets though not himself a poet.  I’m afraid I don’t think much of Jarrell as either a poet or critic.  I. A. Richards was a top-drawer critic, but not quite that as a poet–I vaguely remember that he wrote poetry, but I’m not sure of it.  William Empson’s criticism impresses me much more than his poetry.    Cleanth Brooks is an under-rated critic but not a poet.  Northrop Frye is another first-line critic who wrote no poetry that I know of.  Their names will last longer than a lot of poets once widley honored.

Bonus (which I will comment on tomorrow–and, yes, it is–among other things–a puzzle-poem):

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Entry 664 — “Mathemaku in Praise of Reading, No. 1″

Thursday, February 23rd, 2012

In less than a week, I’ve be putting up another show.  This one will be in the school board building, so teachers will be passing by it.  Ergo, I’m trying to use pieces they may like, including the following:

I may have posted this before, and/or posted the much more elaborate, full color version of it I made . . . but now think too elaborate.

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Entry 660 — Tiny Revision

Sunday, February 19th, 2012

 

I’m beginning to think this one is okay, after all.  One thing I’ve been meaning to point out in case any future students of poetry are ever drawn to my work is that I seem more and more lately to be recycling old images of mine–like the remainder in this piece, and the boats from Klee.  I consider this a step up, not down, because it’s a way of multiplying allusions.  It’s also a form of variations on themes.

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Entry 659 — A Tribute to the Piano

Saturday, February 18th, 2012

I had high hopes for this one, which I composed yesterday.  I even thought I might work a sequence out of it, using the Klee ship “musical theme” as the first step of a visual symphony.  But I wasn’t satisfied with what I did with the ships.  As I worked with them, though, I came up with a lot of minor ideas I liked.  The main one was a suddenly conscious attempt to provide a metaphor for the coming of spring.  But I also liked breaking up what was originally as single framed image, and changing the sizes of each unit.  Grey-scaling the first two tiny ones seemed a nice touch, too.  And the escape of the final ship!  I didn’t like my dividend too well, either–after my initial enthusiasm for it (being a sucker for anything having to do with spring).  For some reason it doesn’t seem quite there, for me.  Maybe I’ll simplify it to, “a brook’s revived consideration of an April countryside.”  Yes, I think I was trying for too much. . . .

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Entry 657 — My Motto as a Poetry Critic

Thursday, February 16th, 2012

 Thinking about what Tony Robinson had at his blog spurred me to this motto of my own (obnoxious) practice as a poetry critic: Try for maximal understanding of the nature and value of what I’m critiquing, fully committed to the advance of poetry, as I understand it, and expressed with the best balance of clarity and fresh language I can manage.  I originally continued with “–with no significant suppression of emotion, regardless of the tender feelings of the hyper-offendable,” but upon reflection found that nice to say but too secondary for this motto. 

Better: Using the the best balance of clarity and fresh language I can manage, try to express maximal understanding of the nature and value of what I’m critiquing, fully committed to the advance of poetry, as I see it.  Ah, but I now see that “the value of what I’m critiquing” would include what the latter does to advance poetry.  Ergo:  Try, using the the best balance of clarity and fresh language I can manage, to express maximal understanding of the nature and value of what I’m critiquing. 

And here’s a copy (an imperfect one) of my motto as a poet:

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Entry 650 — Some Anti-Philogushy

Thursday, February 9th, 2012

Me Versus B. H. Fairchild and Others He quotes

Language can be a way of rescuing the hidden life, and that way is poetry.  You can’t rescue any hidden life, whatever that is, with prose?  Or some other art?  Or science?  Why wouldn’t using language to drown certain aspects of unhidden life be equally or more valuable? 

Glenn Gould: “The purpose of art is the gradual, lifelong construction of a state of wonder and serenity.” And wonder is everything to a poet.   It sure isn’t everything to me.  It and serenity are only two of many pleasures it is the function of art to provide.   Its manner of providing them is what sets it apart from verosophy and other endeavors which can, and try, to lead to wonder and serenity, and other pleasures.

Mandelstam: “We will remember in Lethe’s cold waters / That earth for us has been worth a thousand heavens.”  Nice thought–but unattainable heavens to dream toward are a high good, too.

Seven propositions:

1. By way of Wittgenstein and Heidegger: A poem is a verbal construction which, through an array of rhetorical and prosodic devices of embodiment, achieves an order of being, an ontological status, radically different from that of other forms of discourse (with the exception of certain kinds of descriptive and fictional prose).  I agree: a poem is a verbal construction different from almost all other verbal constructions.

2. Poetry occurs at a considerable distance from the ego.  As does almost anything else I can think of, when it isn’t nothing but ego.

3. There exists an infinity of nonverbal meaning.  Which the infinity of possible verbal meaning can express.

4. Science is progressive, but Art is not. It doesn’t get better; it just gets different. (The relevance and utility of all poetic forms.) See Mandestam.  All the arts, like all the sciences, have become vastly superior to what they were hundreds or thousands of years ago, but anti-progressives mistake the sentimentality that becomes more and more attached to the old because of their age for aesthetic rather than nostalgiacal value.  Compare the clumsy “novel” in the Bible about David with almost any competent commercial novel of today, for instance.  Consider how much more of existence the best art of today is about compared with earlier art.  For just one thing, today’s art has a vastly larger tradition to make allusions to than previous art had.  There have been artists in the past as great as our best, but what our best have produced is significantly better than what they did in part because of the what the artists of the past did.  (Note, this is a subject requiring a book.)

5. Rules are made to be broken; techniques are made to be used. (They were never rules anyway; they were techniques. The freedom of the artist, like that of the lathe machinist, is the freedom to choose those techniques, those tools, that he deems necessary for the task at hand. The refusal to use technique–and, obviously, to learn it–is the refusal to be an artist, or at least a free one.)  I more or less agree with all this, but I wonder how one can avoid using some technique.

6. Form is an extension of subject matter rather than of ideology or religious belief.  Every work of art requires a container; I call that container form; one calling it “an extension of subject matter,” if I understand him, needs to tell me what, then, is containing it and the subject matter it is an extension of.  I don’t know what ideology and religious belief have to do with it; how would they be not subject matter?

7. Meter is not the reins to keep the horse of the poem in check; it’s the heartbeat of the horse. Drop the reins. (Clearly this is an argument for meter rather than against it.) It is almost impossible to convince poets who never bothered to learn prosody that meter is something that emerges from within the language rather than something that is imposed externally upon the language. Even conversational English is very loosely iambic.  I think meter is both natural and imposed–necessarily imposed to add predictability to balance the difficult-to-accept unpredictability of horses going beyond prose that poetry at its best is. 

A poet is always limited by the fact that he has to write for other human beings.  Just to be argumentative, I would say that a poet’s having to write for others (and he needn’t) greatly increases his field of play.  (Note that our Wilshberian’s poet writes rather than composes.  It never occurs to any Wilshberian that a poem might be more than words.)

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