Archive for January, 2010

Entry 81 — MATO2, Chapter 1.03

Thursday, January 21st, 2010

Thursday afternoon, 28 June 1990 John Byrum dropped by and we had a nice visit.  He was the first in my new circle of visual poets I met in person.  I told him the story of the printing of my book after showing him my television camera and trying to take a few sequences with it.  I got some footage but just a little that was any good.  I had left the camera on its tripod so I could be in the picture and it didn’t work.  I had everything set up right, I later realized, but zoomed in on John getting out of the car (for the second time) and forgot to unzoom, so had very little space to work with, and I and John weren’t in it much.  John left me some  works of his, and the latest publication of the Generator Press, a fine small book of Stephen-Paul Martin’s stuff.  I gave him an inscribed copy of my book, naturally, and got rid of a few other Runaway Spoon books.  I had now distributed 35 copies of Of Manywhere-at-Once, 5 of them to people who actually paid money for them!  Ten or so more were slated to be given away.

John for some reason reminded me a lot of my nephew Scott.  Similar coloring and kind of face (I think).  John’s not as tall as Scott (he’s around five nine, I guess) but fairly solid of build.  Same kind of slowish but not unintelligent geniality, too.  Probably about the same age as well, or twenty years younger than I.   I enjoyed his visit, and him.  I’m unhappy I’m so poor at character sketches, but I suppose he was at my place too briefly to do anything truly character-revealing.

Entry 80 — MATO2, Chapter 1.02

Wednesday, January 20th, 2010

On Friday, 22 June 1990, I drove to Fort Myers in a rental car to pick up a hundred or so copies of Of Manywhere-at-Once, my very first full-length book. I’d xeroxed its pages using a Xerox I’d been able to buy using an inheritance from my step-grandmother, and taken the pages to Fort Myers to a printer than perfect-bound them. I thought the book looked pretty good.

Over the weekend that followed, I packed 22 copies, mailing them out to literary friends and family members on Monday. The next day I attended a meeting of the Port Charlotte Tuesday Writers’ Group.

My writers’ club meeting went fairly well: Lee Hoffman (a prize-winning writer of westerns and my closest friend in Port Charlotte, and possibly the best friend I ever had anywhere) brought me a bunch of software, and I talked a while about my book and ended selling two copies of it, one to Nell (an extremely nice older lady who’d had a couple of books published), and one to a lady who was at another meeting of ours long ago and showed up for no particular reason today. She said she felt stumped by modern poetry despite having recently had a college class in it. I told her my book might help her with it. I’ll be interested to find out how she finds the book, and whether it helps her.

Thinking about that when I later covered the day in my diary, I realized that I put no transitions from traditional poetry into the various new kinds of poetry my book was about.  I described the various kinds of poetries but was not too good about showing where they are alike, and why someone who likes one kind ought to like the best examples of the other kinds as well.  Of course, I indirectly did all that by discussing the different kinds of poems similarly, and finding similar good things in them. And what I then called the eulocational, dislocational (mainly jump-cut)  et al discussion was fairly direct.

Entry 79 — MATO2, Chapter 1.01

Tuesday, January 19th, 2010

CHAPTER ONE

The Journey Continues

I published the first version of my Of Manywhere-at-Once in 1990, then quickly did a second improved edition.  I was energetic in those days, and fully expected my book to be just the first in a series of six to ten volumes.  I didn’t see why they shouldn’t come out one a year.

I thought about what I’d write about in volume two for a year or more following publication.  I scribbled a few notes about it, too, but did nothing really constructive about it until 1996, if then, for all I did then was gather diary entries that would continue the narrative of the first volume, essentially the tale of a man’s struggle to make a living (or more) as a writer, and to bring the gospel of what I now call plurexpressive poetry to The People.  That the book remained unfinished so long I attribute mainly to the first volume’s not getting anyone influential behind it, and my not having enough money to invest in a follow-up.

My notes began with “1. Present Circumstance,” and the following entry from my diary:

“16 March 1996: start with my hopes of this week regarding the Guggenheim, then give history of my attempts to win awards, plus the history of volume one’s reception.  Second  chapter should reveal my one Great Accomplishments since Volume One, my mathemaku, and  cryptographiku–and go on into my other experimental poems.  Chapter Three’s beginning: ‘Then there was The Sonnet.’  Although I had written dozens of versions of it, as described in Volume One, I hadn’t finished it by the time I published the latter (or its second edition). Indeed, I continued madly revising even unto . . .

“Beginning of Chapter Four: ‘Meanwhile, I remained active as a scholar,’” but, I told myself, “the book should be memoirish, and not rigorously classificatory: mention poems, poetries, poets, in passing. “

Entry 78 — Of Manywhere-at-Once, Volume Two

Monday, January 18th, 2010

For three months or so I have been critiquing a book by an imbecile who doesn’t know who wrote the works of Shakespeare, only that Shakespeare did not.   Diana Price’s Shakespeare’s Unorthodox Biography. Each day (but one) I’ve attacked a section of it at HLAS, where the authorship debate can be carried on without restrictions.  I started the critique for many reasons, the main one being that the book is too full of crap to ignore.  Nor did I ignore it when it was first published.  I read it through, making copious annoyed and sarcastic annotations in it.  I wrote up an overview of its main thesis for use in my own authorship book.  And I fully intended to write a thorough critique of it–which I never got around to.  Until now.

2009 was a terrible year for me, especially the second half of it.  I did almost no writing during that second half.  So my second reason for my critique was simply to force myself into a writing routine.  I have to admit I also wanted something to express anger about, being pretty unhappy at the time with just about everything in my life.  In other words, take out my misery on poor Diana Price.  Not a worthy victim but published hardbound by a more respectable company than I ever was, and asked to lecture on her book at universities, as I never have been asked to lecture on my Shakespeare book.  Oh, what I’d really call my main purpose is to present a full-scale portrait of a propagandist–that is, reveal what the main propagandistic devices are and how they work.  A handbook on propaganda for the uninitiated, or–more exactly–the incompletely initiated–which would include me, out to learn in the process.

My venture  has so far been successful.  My critique is now almost 40,000 words long, and I’m almost halfway through Price’s books, which I’m covering page by page.   For some reason today I thought of a similar project I could start here: constructing day by day another book I have notes for and long ago seriously hoped to write but didn’t, my Of Manywhere-at-Once, Volume Two. (I’ve had a third volume in mind to do, as well.)

So: tomorrow I’ll begin it.  I figure I’ve pretty much taken care of this entry already–and want to add something to it that has nothing to do with my manywhere book, but want to record in case I forget about it.  It has to do with my knowlecualr psychology, specifically with my theory of temperaments.  Until an hour or so ago, I posited four temperaments (or personality-types): the rigidnik, the milyoop, the ord, and the freewender for, respectively, high-charactration/low accommodance persons, high-accommodance/low charactration persons, medium charactration/medium accommodance (ordinary) persons, and high charactration/high accommodance persons.   My types were based on two of my three mechanisms of intelligence, charactration and accommodance.  I suddenly saw earlier today that a fifth temperament based on the third mechanisms of intelligence, accelerance, might be in order.  A person high in accelerance bu not high in either of the other two mechanisms.   An eruptor?  Not sure how good a name that is, but it will do for now.

Entry 77 — Stray Thoughts

Sunday, January 17th, 2010

I’m so tired of reading lists of poetry collections purported to be superior and finding nothing written about the collections except descriptions of their subject matter (and their author’s slant on life, if that’s not subject matter, as well).

I’m in the middle of Zane Grey’s Riders of the Purple Sage (his intended version, not the one originally published).  I’d never read anything of his before although I have from time to time read, and enjoyed, others’ westerns.  It seems a better book to me than anything nobelist Steinbeck ever wrote.

I’m not happy to say this because it could well indicate I’m out of it in some serious way, but there is no mainstream poet whose just-published collection I’d be eager or even interested in reading.   That’s because none of them makes me wonder excitedly what new things they might have done now.   I do read mainstream poetry, although not nearly as much as I read escapist literature, both fiction and non-fiction (e.g., science for the layman), but it’s mainstream poetry from decades ago.

A wack and I argue nature/nurture from time to time.  He believes Oxford was born at just the right time in just the right circumstances to have been nurtured into The World’s Greatest Poet whereas I believe he had the right genes to become one of the world’s greatest poets.  Anyway, he argues that if I’m right there should be many Shakespeares around today considering how many more people are alive than were when he was.  I believe there are, but how would one recognize them?  Fascinating topic with a huge number of variables and difficult questions.  One big variable for me is the effect of over-population on the recognition by society of it.  Obviously a Shakespeare will stand out more in a world with only a few geniuses spread out in it than in one like ours where a city like New York may have twenty of them active in the same square mile.

A huge problem is the apples/oranges one: how do you compare Beethoven, Darwin, Klee and Shakespeare with one another.  Or even someone like Aristophanes with Shakespeare?  The former’s plays were not nearly as complex and rich as Shakespeare’s but that doesn’t mean he was not Shakespeare’s equal as a playwright any more than Archimedes must have been a lesser scientist than Newton because his discoveries were less sophisticated than Newton’s.

What would a present-day Darwin do in biology?  He can’t achieve any large thing the size of what Darwin did, because there is only one main idea in biology, natural selection,  and Darwin was first to it.  But why can’t lower-level discoveries not take as much genius to arrive at than Darwin’s?

I think many filmed histories superior by far to any of Shakespeare’s histories.  David Lean’s Lawrence of Arabia, for instance.  Shakespeare’s verbal diction is superior to Lean’s but Lean makes up for it with his photography.

I think Shaw’s Saint Joan superior to any of Shakespeare’s histories.  His Caesar and Cleopatra may be, too.

A metaphysical thought I’ve always half-believed in is that there are only so many Shakespeare-level urwarenesses in existence, an urwareness being a person’s ultimate self and different from anyone else’s and (perhaps) responsible for what adheres to it to form the body (and brain) it will have as a human being.  If there are only a dozen or so Shakespeare-level urwarenesses in existence, then it won’t matter how large the global population becomes, there will never be more than a dozen or so super-geniuses around.

Robert Crumb may be one of them.  I bring him up because I consider artists in his field possibly the most stupidly under-rated artists there are, and he seems to me tops in his field.  I believe his superior is bound eventually to appear–one who adds what Pollock had and brilliance as a poet to what Crumb has.  And is better than Crumb at what I consider major plots, Crumb being a sort of short-story writer.

Entry 76 — Miscellaneous Thoughts

Saturday, January 16th, 2010

About the numbers in yesterday’s cryptographiku: they indicate how many spaces to indent each of the numbered words.  In the proper version of the poem, where each such word lines up with respect to the bottom line indicates part of the coded text secreted in the poem.

Now one of my memorable epigrams, a new one although the message is same old same:

If a distinguished critic condemns your poem in print, worry; if it were any good, he’d never have been aware of its existence

Something I may have discovered when skimming the 2009 issues of Poetry that a friend gave me: if Poetry is any indication, Iowa Plaintext Poems are no longer 90% de rigueur in Poetry Establishment magazines.   The school whose poems are based technically mainly on the jump-cutting of “The Wasteland” (or is that “The Waste Land?”) with extra surrealistic automatic writing thrown in a la Ashbery seems number one now.  Peculiar, because just a few years ago, it looked like Poetry was setting up as the nation’s champion of accessible poetry.

Entry 74 — Poetic Densities, Continued

Thursday, January 14th, 2010

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.        Sonnet 18
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.       Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?
.       Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
.       Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May
.       And summer’s lease hath all too short a date.
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.       Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines
.       And often is his gold complexion dimmed.
.       And every fair from fair sometime declines
.       By chance or Nature’s changing course untrimmed.
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.       But thy eternal summer shall not fade
.       Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow’st.
.       Nor shall Death brag thou wandr’st in his shade
.       When in eternal lines to time thou grow’st.
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.       So long as men have breath and eyes to see,
.       So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
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Shakespeare, 140 syllables,  116 words (because I count “sometime’ as two words) to give a semantic density of .83.  That’s lower than I estimated yesterday because when I forgot that not all its words of more than one syllable had only one more than one.  So Frost’s poem is quite a bit higher than Shakespeare’s.

The sonnet has a surprisingly low euphonic density: .09.  It makes up for that in repenemic density.  I have the figures somewhere to measure that with but am not up to finding them just now.

Entry 73 — “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening”

Wednesday, January 13th, 2010

As long-term readers of my blog will know, one of my projects is an in-depth study of Shakespeare’s “Sonnet 18.”  I’ve also been interested in Frost’s “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening.”  While thinking about it recently, I realized how few polysyllabic words it had.  Always ready to formulaize something if I can, I soon came up with a (possibly) new characteristic of poems, semantic density.  It is equal to  the number of syllables in a poem divided into the number of words in the poem.  It turns out the Frost poem’s semantic density is .86, Shakespeare’s about the same.   I suspect few other poems have as high a semantic density, but I haven’t investigated the matter.

.                 Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening

.                 Whose woods these are I think I know.
.                 His house is in the village though;
.                 He will not see me stopping here
.                 To watch his woods fill up with snow.

.                 My little horse must think it queer
.                 To stop without a farmhouse near
.                 Between the woods and frozen lake
.                 The darkest evening of the year.

.                 He gives his harness bells a shake
.                 To ask if there is some mistake.
.                 The only other sound’s the sweep
.                 Of easy wind and downy flake.

.                 The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
.                 But I have promises to keep,
.                 And miles to go before I sleep,
.                 And miles to go before I sleep.

Technically speaking, there are seventeen polysyllabic words in this poem, one of them three syllables in length, all the others just two in length.  I do not count “farmhouse” as a single word, though, since each of its two syllables has a clear separate meaning, “farm” really being an adjective pushed into a noun, “house.”  And I count “”sound’s” as two words, because it is: “sound” plus “is.”  Yet is is only one syllable in length.  So, to get the semantic density of the poem, we divide 110, not 109, by 128

Once become mathematically irreverent toward about the ratio of words in a poem to its syllables, I thought of other density ratios applicable to poems: e.g., euphonic density or the ratio of euphonies (long-o‘s, long-u‘s and “ah”-sounds) to number of syllables in a poem, repenemic density (repenemes to syllables, a repeneme being a repeated melodation such as alliterationor rhyme, the latter counting as two repenemes) and–this one I especially like–oddword density.  This would be the ratio of unusual words to syllable-count, with “unusual” being what a word is that comes up only a certain low number of times in s large sample of contemporary writing.

The euphonic denisty of Frost’s poem is just under .20.  I’d be surprised if many other poems have a euphonic denisty that high.  I’ll check Shakespeare’s “Sonnet 18″ tomorrow.

Entry 72 — 3 Poem Poems

Tuesday, January 12th, 2010

Among the Poem Poems not yet in a chap book that I am withholding from my upcoming chapbook are the following three:

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.    The Age of Vendler
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.    Sometimes,
.    frustrated by a bouldering
.    of some sky he was trying to daisle
.    a fresh pulse through,
.    Poem envied the traipses

.     of never fully-specified ladymoods
.     that monopoliszed the highest praise
.     of the tenured
.     and regretted the balls
.     that kept him mythodically direct,
.     technically venturesome.
.     and socio-economically marginal–
.     even as he knew
.     in his heart of hearts
.     how trivial the appreciation of the academy was
.      compared to where he went,. however ineptly.
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.     On the Importance of Getting Published
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.     To ask if you should write poetry
.     even if you cannot get published
.     struck Poem at first like asking
.     if you should get laid
.     even if you cannot get it
.     on tv.
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.     Then he saw that poetry
.     as donation sans recipient
.     is hardly comparable to two-party sex.
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.     But so what? Pumping jizz
.     into one’s own kleenex
.     is still better than no sex at all,
.     or getting published
.     even if you can’t write poetry.
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.              Poem’s Trudge
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.                     Pouhm trud
.                     ged through yet another of his att
.                                        empts to regrammar something into p
.                oetry, in this case a phoneline 3 or 4
.                             sprows had haikued above h
.     im & the splanch of worn twilight behind it,
.                     getting nothing but the standard pre-cerebral
.                                              sprout of “meaningfulness’ all
.                                                   the fash
.                                   ionable poets of the time
.                            were getting big money in grants for, the disgstd
.          down yet lower when his ineffectuousness
.                itself sprang an epipha
.                                                             ny.
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I’m keeping them out of the collection because they are about Poem as a poet, which I consider confusing.  If I get enough of them, I published them in a collection called, Poem as a Poet.    I may have five or six of them.  I t doesn’t looke like I’ll ever have the twelve or more I’d want for a collection.


Entry 71 — A Broadside from the Past

Monday, January 11th, 2010

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I’m pretty sure this resulted from some contact I made in Chicago when there for an underground press conference.  Not sure when that was.  Maybe fifteen years ago. . .  I’ve since lost touch with everyone named on the page.  I do remember Ashley as a good kid and valuable undergrounder.