Archive for December, 2009

Entry 40 — #675 through #670

Saturday, December 12th, 2009

In #675, I posted Endwar’s “Ten X Ten,” having liked it so much, I assume, that I’d forgotten I’d posted it a week of so before at my blog.  Under the Endwar piece, I had three mathematical poems by Kaz Maslanka, one of which is also a visual poem but too large to reproduce here without losing most of the text.  One of the others has the same problem, but the one below should be readable:

a-mans-intelligenceOops, you may need a magnifying glass.  My choice of reproduction seems to be the size above, or four times as large.  Anyway, it’s called “A Man’s Intelligence” and may be more informrature–a specimen of informratry–than poetry.  Let me quote what it says: “A man’s Intelligence” equals “intelligence Quotient” divided by the product of “The measurable level of Dionysian blood transfused in a saffron masseuse boasting whispers through the cool crystal shot glass of the finest golden tequila” times “The amount of passion fueled by a young pink Venus–her hand wandering in slow circular patterns, a seemingly aimless whistle up the man’s inner thigh.”

#677 and #678 are about the Christmas mathemaku I’d done a draft of the previous year, and worked some more on at this time (December 2005), and have worked on since then, finishing it, I believe.   Then a reproduction and revision of a long division poem I used in the autobiographical essay in the mainstream series of such things I got it into many years ago, without its making any difference whatever in my vocational reputation.  I don’t like it well enough to reproduce it here.  I had another of my mathematical poems in #680 that I don’t like enough to reproduce here.

Entry 39 — 3 by Endwar

Thursday, December 10th, 2009

They’re from #674.

Communist-EvolutionCommunist Evolution

NoNoNoNo

TransgenderTransgender

#673 had two poems by John Elsbergs from his Runaway Spoon Press book, Broken Poems for Evita. One was this:

          RAISING EVA

          (Or, the myth of art and politics)

          L

              EVITA

          tio        nis

               th           EPRE

                     fer

               RED        al        TERN

                     at        ivefor

          thosewhona                t         UR

                        ALLY          S

                                                     inK

And that’s it for this entry.    (Am I feeling more worn out than ever for no reason?  Yes.)

Entry 38 — “Poem Ventures North-South”

Wednesday, December 9th, 2009

The following is a revision I did over the past two days of a poem from  entry 741 that for some reason got mixed in with the earlier blog entries I’ve been revisiting:

Poem Ventures North-South

One morning, Poem set out for the north-south.
Never having gone precisely there before, he hoped
the change would shake him out
of the null zone he’d been too long in.
The sun was halfway to noon,
when he rippled into a locked gate,
“Prose Poem,” engraved on it.

Straight through the gate, Poem strode, that element of him that
was fictional not for the first time being of advantage. A few dazed
steps later he realized he’d come to a corner of his final telephone
call to his father–the one Poochie, the little rubber dog his father
had given him one birthday, daily merged more completely with.

From the Shell station across the street, now long-abandoned, rose
some aria from La Boheme. Many slow clotheslines later in China the aria sank in a suburban Chinatown alley’s moonlit Drunkenness.
Poem would surely have left at that point had one of the gas pumps
not unworried a carton of Camels (his father’s brand) into something resembling cherry-blossoms. From them, the aria from La Boheme re-emerged. The shadow it cast resembled Roman legions–from when
Rome was still a republic.

Is it any good? Who knows?

Entry 37 — Didacticry

Tuesday, December 8th, 2009

A real quickie today: just the introduction of a coinage, “didacticry” dih DAH tih kree, meaning poemlike text who main intent is clearly didactic, not aesthetic.  For example: “Early to bed. early to rise,/ Makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.”  Part of my campaign to limit the definition of poetry to literature, which I limit to verbal expression intended mainly to cause aesthetic pleasure.  “Early to bed,” causes some such pleasure but is mainly advocature in that it is an attempt to persuade its readers of the virtue of going to be early and rising early.

Entry 36 — 2 by Koppany from #672

Monday, December 7th, 2009

.

Csend-Sinc

Csend-Sinc

TheAnds

The Ands

Nothing else.  I’m hoping to get going again on columns for Small Press Review. A deadline is approaching and I’d like to get ahead.  It’d be nice, too, to start getting real work done.

Entry 35 — Thoughts on Scatteredness

Sunday, December 6th, 2009

On Sundays, I turn off my computer at eleven in the morning and leave it off till five so people who want to talk to me on the phone can do so (which they can’t when I’m connected to the Internet because I have dial-up, and also like to stay connected to the Internet even when not using my computer so as to block junk phone calls).  Ergo, since it’s quarter to eleven as I type this, I’ll soon be off the computer.  I could still do a Major Entry offline, but it’s more difficult than doing it online and I’m lazy.  In any case, I’m going to do a quickie today, just this, quoted in its entirety with no changes from #671:

3 December 2005:

Someone I argue with on the Internet about who wrote Shakespeare asserted that “those who achieve greatness go about their work in a markedly different way than those who achieve only mediocrity. A scattershot approach to writing, wherein one works on several ‘major projects’ (forgive me for refusing to equate the composition of King Lear with the cleaning of your house, Bob, but I don’t think I’ll even bother to come up with support for this assertion) is an indication, not that we are dealing with a major talent, but rather that we are dealing with procrastination and mediocrity.” We were arguing about a recent Biography of Shakespeare that hypothesized that he finished four different plays in one year. My opponent claimed it wasn’t possible; I that it most certainly was. I used myself as an example of a writer who had a lot of major projects going at a time. Hence, my opponent’s distinguishing “mediocrities” from Shakespeare-level artists. I mentioned getting my house organized as one of the major projects I was involved in, which accounts for his reference to “the cleaning of (my) house.”

It seems to me many culturateurs (people whose contribution to world culture was major) worked on four or more major cultural projects (a major project needn’t be cultural) during a year, and some of them worked on two or more of them simultaneously, especially composers and painters. A blurriness of recall prevents me from thinking of any particular such culturateurs except for Leonardo–who was definitely handicapped by his approach to his endeavors; I wouldn’t say it was a “scattershot approach,” but it leaned that way, for sure.

I’ve always alternated between pride in my scattershot approach and worry about it. Certainly, it’s kept me from finishing much. But, I claim, only so far. Next year, will be different. Actually, this year hasn’t been so bad, for I finished one long-in-progress play during it (and two such plays near the end of the year before). At the moment, I am at work on (1) my book on the Shakespeare authorship debate (which is more an introduction to my theory of psychology, (2) a central life’s work of mine); (3) and (4) two new plays, (5) my essay on E. E. Cummings’s Influence (which I hope will become book-length at some point), (6) these blog entries (and improvements to my blog), (7) my mathemaku sequence,The Long Division of Poetry, (8) a large mathemaku I’m tentatively calling “Mathemaku in Homage to Modern Technology,” (9) my mathemaku, in general, (10) my Poem poem sequence, (11) getting mine house in order, (12) various anthologies or zines I’ve agreed to send poems or essays to and/or guest-edit. Impressive-sounding, but I do procrastinate, and play Civilization too much. I won’t finish any of these this year, and may not ever. Nonetheless, I’ll be severely unhappy if I don’t take care of most of them next year–as well as get the next volume of Writing To Be Seen, the anthology Crag Hill and I have co-edited, into print, another major project. It remains to be seen whether or not the results will make it above mediocrity, but I’m betting on myself.

Just changed my mind–got curious as to what happened with the projects I was working on almost exactly four years ago.  So, here’s the list again with my comments: At the moment, I am at work on (1) my book on the Shakespeare authorship debate (which is more an introduction to my theory of psychology (Whee, finished and self-published in two editions!);(2) a central life’s work of mine) (not sure what this was but probably finishing a complete version of my knowlecular psychology theory, which I am no closer to having done than I was four years ago); (3) and (4) two new plays (unfinished, one of them possibly lost in a computer crash, but the other at least half done): (5) my essay on E. E. Cummings’s Influence (which I hope will become book-length at some point) (I finished this as a long essay but haven’t made a book of it, which I still hope to do); (6) these blog entries (and improvements to my blog) (I have kept the blog going); (7) my mathemaku sequence,The Long Division of Poetry (I have extended this significantly since then and improved it, I believe), (8) a large mathemaku I’m tentatively calling “Mathemaku in Homage to Modern Technology” (I finished this); (9) my mathemaku, in general (I’ve continue producing mathemaku, although not as rapidly as I hoped I would back then); (10) my Poem poem sequence (It’s ongoing); (11) getting mine house in order (I think I half-did this, but it’s as disorganized as ever right now);(12) various anthologies or zines I’ve agreed to send poems or essays to and/or guest-edit (A few of these done possibly, but most not).

Entry 34 — Yesterday’s Mathemaku Again, and Another

Saturday, December 5th, 2009

Here’s the latest version of what I think I’m calling “Frame 17″ of The Long Division of Poetry:

17Aug07D-light

I didn’t like the background blue as dark as it showed here, so I lightened it.  For some reason, that made a lot of difference to me.  I also changed the quotient of the mathemaku below, another variation on the lead frame of The Long Division of Poetry that I composed in 2007 and have only touched up slightly since, mostly to increase its resolution.  I feel it’s about as good as I’m capable of getting as a mathematical poet–although I do feel I’ve done a few mathemaku that are better than it.

20Nov09E

The divisor is hard to read on-site, I don’t know why.  The image is much darker than it is on the screen of the computer where I do my Paint Shop work, even though I tried to lighten it.   Oh, it’s tiff on my computer, jpeg here, which may explain it.  Anyway, the divisor reads, “a memory of/ Harbor View, June 27, 1952″

Note: for those of you new to Grumman Studies, “manywhere-at-once,” which is usually capitalized, is where (according to my poetics) metaphors and other figures of speech send one.  Two or more places in one’s brain at the same time.  So this poem attempts to express the value of equaphoration–my term for any poetic device that in some way equates one thing with another, even irony, which equates the truth with its opposite.

Entry 33 — Yesterday’s Poem

Friday, December 4th, 2009

Here’s yesterday’s image again:

17Aug07B

It’s one of my mathemaku, of course.    I’ve actually been working industriously  on it, trying get it right enough to submit to some sort of  anthology Nico Vassilakis and Crag Hill are putting together.   The version above is a recent revision of my first draft of 2007, a variation on “Frame One” of my Long Division of Poetry series.

17Aug07D-light

“Frame One” is similar to the top image except that its divisor is “words.”  It had long bothered me because (and make sure to write this down, students, because it’s an excellent example of the way I think about my poems) its claim was that “words” squared (basically–although it’s really distorted words, or words told slant. times regular words) happened to equal an image having to do with summer rain.  Why that and not, say, a Pacific sunset?   Obviously, the quotient times the divisor could equal anything.  That, I didn’t want.  Off and on I thought about this, but could think of no way to take care of it.  Until a couple of days ago, when I finally concentrated for more than a few minutes on it.  I came up with several pretty good solutions, one of them changing everything in the poem but the sub-dividend product (the image).

My final solution (I hope) resulted in the above poem.  All I did was add “memories of a long-ago summer day” to the quotient.  That assured that the sub-dividend product would have to do with summer–that it would be, that is, a visual poem about summer.  And, as a poem, it would be poetry.

No doubt in due course I’ll think of something else I find illogical about it and want to revise it again.  For now, though, I’m happy with it.

Oh, I’ve made several changes to the main image in it, too.  One was to combat the darkness in the top version (which wasn’t in it until I put it out here).  I’m as fussy about getting my graphics looking the way I want them as I am about everything else in a poem–except the choice of font, and things I can’t do anything about with my equipment, like density of resolution.

Entry 32 — A Mathemaku from 2007

Thursday, December 3rd, 2009

I continue to be more out of it than not, so have just this for today:

17Aug07B

Guess who composed it.

Entry 31 — Old Blog Entries 663 through 670

Wednesday, December 2nd, 2009

In #663, I presented my Odysseus Suite–but the reproduction is too crude for me to re-post it here.   My next entry featured this, by Endwar:

TenByTenAs I announced when I first posted this, I am hoping to publish an anthology of mathematical poems, like this one, so if you have one or know of one, send me a copy of it, or tell me about it.

#665 had this by Marton Koppany, which I have to post here because it was dedicated to ME:

Odysseus

Hey, it’s mathematical, too.  The next entry, whose number I fear to state, concerned this:

Bielski-Haiku-BW

This is from Typewriter Poems, an anthology published by Something Else Press and Second Aeon back in 1972. It’s by Alison Bielski, An English woman born in 1925 whose work I’m unfamiliar with. I find this specimen a charmer . . . but am not sure what to make of it. Three lines, as in the classic haiku. The middle one is some sort of filter. Is “n” the “n” in so much mathematics? If so, what’s the poem saying? And where does the night and stars Hard for me not to assume come in? Pure mathematics below, a sort of practical mathematics above? That idea would work better for me if the n’s were in the lower group rather than in the other. Rather reluctantly, I have to conclude the poem is just a texteme design. I hope someone more clever sets me right, though. (I’m pretty sure I’ve seen later visio-textual works using the same filter idea–or whatever the the combination of +’s. =’s and n’s is, but can’t remember any details.)

It was back to my lifelong search for a word meaning “partaker of artwork” in #667–but I now believe “aesthimbiber,” which I thought of in a post earlier than #667, I believe, but dropped, may be the winner of my search.

Next entry topic was about what visual poets might do to capture a bigger audience.  I said nothing worth reposting on a topic going nowhere because visual poets, in general, are downright inimical to doing anything as base as trying to increase their audience.   One suggestion I had was to post canonical poems along with visual poems inspired by them, which I mention because in my next entry, I did just that, posting a Wordsworth sonnet and a visual poem I did based on and quoting part of it–and don’t re-post here because of space limitations.  I wrote about the two in the final entry in this set of ten old blog entries.